poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Lenore (41-60)

Comments byLenore, 41–60 back. Include replies

on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8 24 Sep 2002, 9:26 PM
Truly evil are the mechanisms of repression in church and society, which do not see the shadow in themselves. So says Baphomet 1st in 7. 7/10
on West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones 27 Sep 2002, 11:59 AM
aren't we all nowhere and nothing and at the same time, everywhere and everything? Brilliant Paradox!
It's deep down there, very deep. 10!
on Transfixed (#2) by Christof 27 Sep 2002, 12:02 PM
god's wife, are you sure it wasn't the 'cup' you are feeling?? ;)
on A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom 27 Sep 2002, 12:25 PM
Now is the time for all good men to come to the aid of their country. For me this poem is about typing and nothing more.
on The Mill by vulcan 27 Sep 2002, 11:33 AM
When we are gone,
they will remain;
Wind and rock,
Fire and rain.
Nice! 8/10
on some deleted poem 27 Sep 2002, 11:34 AM
roots silver skinned and leaves
Tobacco rolled and smoke dry
Love these. 7/10
on some deleted poem 24 Sep 2002, 8:17 PM
I'm not sure if bald is 'good' but it's a hell of a lot better than a comb-over!
on Taffy by knickytoy 24 Sep 2002, 8:22 PM
When I feel like that I go to York beach and ride the coaster,build sand castles and gorge myself on the peanut butter taffy made right there on the board walk. I come home feeling all shiny, and new again. Great poem! 10/10
on some deleted poem 24 Sep 2002, 8:35 PM
as soon as I read the first comment I laughed, because I thought the same damn thing. I was really getting into the imagery (especially s2)but the sadness of the bees I didn't get at all. I understand now but as a stand alone I don't think it works.
on The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 25 Jan 2004, 10:34 PM
Sometimes the darker angel presents to the nostrils an apple of the Tree of Life.
other times........

not so much.
on some deleted poem 26 Jan 2004, 11:55 AM
I really enjoyed this poem. I'm reminded to go back to Herkimer. 10
on Flame Game by Goad 26 Jan 2004, 10:19 AM
dirty, sad, heart dragging steal. 10
on The Ballade of Hollis Browne by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26 Jan 2004, 12:20 PM
I didn't even read this and I know it stinks! 10
on some deleted poem 26 Jan 2004, 12:39 PM
boiled and flies was brilliant! The rest toss.
on some deleted poem 26 Jan 2004, 12:41 PM
You are absolutely right!
on Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac 28 Jan 2004, 8:55 AM
<keeps me fellow> I think mellow would work better here. Nice and depressing. 8
on Cold Rain Road by middenHeap 28 Jan 2004, 4:24 PM
The last line is as useless as tits on a nun. Otherwise I liked it. 7
on some deleted poem 28 Jan 2004, 4:18 PM
I hate those sick bastards! 7
on Emily Mae by horus8 4 Feb 2004, 9:04 AM
I find it hard to believe that you wrote this poem. Next you'll be writing epic poems about how only the Lighthouse Keeper is lonelier than you are. One can hardly swing a dead animal in here without hitting poems of varying quality extolling the deep sadness of lost love. People, for Christ's sake slap a tourniquet on your bleeding hearts and write something interesting!
on Something's gone wrong by zodiac 4 Feb 2004, 9:21 AM
Something's gone wrong with this poem. It leaves me with hate. You- for being what's wrong. Her- for being a coward. The ending- for being too abrupt. I can't like it. Yet this is one of the best poems here.