regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/8:17 PM
I'm not sure if bald is 'good' but it's a hell of a lot better than a comb-over!
Re: Taffy by knickytoy	24-Sep-02/8:22 PM
When I feel like that I go to York beach and ride the coaster,build sand castles and gorge myself on the peanut butter taffy made right there on the board walk. I come home feeling all shiny, and new again. Great poem! 10/10
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/8:35 PM
as soon as I read the first comment I laughed, because I thought the same damn thing. I was really getting into the imagery (especially s2)but the sadness of the bees I didn't get at all. I understand now but as a stand alone I don't think it works.
Re: The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8	24-Sep-02/9:26 PM
Truly evil are the mechanisms of repression in church and society, which do not see the shadow in themselves. So says Baphomet 1st in 7. 7/10
Re: The Mill by vulcan	27-Sep-02/11:33 AM
When we are gone, they will remain; Wind and rock, Fire and rain. Nice! 8/10
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Sep-02/11:34 AM
roots silver skinned and leaves Tobacco rolled and smoke dry Love these. 7/10
Re: West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones	27-Sep-02/11:59 AM
aren't we all nowhere and nothing and at the same time, everywhere and everything? Brilliant Paradox! It's deep down there, very deep. 10!
Re: Transfixed (#2) by Christof	27-Sep-02/12:02 PM
god's wife, are you sure it wasn't the 'cup' you are feeling?? ;)
Re: A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom	27-Sep-02/12:25 PM
Now is the time for all good men to come to the aid of their country. For me this poem is about typing and nothing more.
Re: The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	25-Jan-04/10:34 PM
Sometimes the darker angel presents to the nostrils an apple of the Tree of Life. other times........ not so much.
Re: Flame Game by Goad	26-Jan-04/10:19 AM
dirty, sad, heart dragging steal. 10
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/11:55 AM
I really enjoyed this poem. I'm reminded to go back to Herkimer. 10
Re: The Ballade of Hollis Browne by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	26-Jan-04/12:20 PM
I didn't even read this and I know it stinks! 10
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/12:39 PM
boiled and flies was brilliant! The rest toss.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/12:41 PM
You are absolutely right!
Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac	28-Jan-04/8:55 AM
<keeps me fellow> I think mellow would work better here. Nice and depressing. 8
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Jan-04/4:18 PM
I hate those sick bastards! 7
Re: Cold Rain Road by middenHeap	28-Jan-04/4:24 PM
The last line is as useless as tits on a nun. Otherwise I liked it. 7
Re: Emily Mae by horus8	4-Feb-04/9:04 AM
I find it hard to believe that you wrote this poem. Next you'll be writing epic poems about how only the Lighthouse Keeper is lonelier than you are. One can hardly swing a dead animal in here without hitting poems of varying quality extolling the deep sadness of lost love. People, for Christ's sake slap a tourniquet on your bleeding hearts and write something interesting!
Re: Something's gone wrong by zodiac	4-Feb-04/9:21 AM
Something's gone wrong with this poem. It leaves me with hate. You- for being what's wrong. Her- for being a coward. The ending- for being too abrupt. I can't like it. Yet this is one of the best poems here.