on Notes toward a possible poem by Nicholas Jones
4 Feb 2004, 9:26 AM
Suck factor- 10
on some deleted poem
4 Feb 2004, 9:30 AM
Third times the charm and so is this. 10
on some deleted poem
4 Feb 2004, 11:30 AM
I know how you operate and your unholy poems should be warning enough for those with morals. I, for one, have no intention of standing idly by while our children are exposed to such revolting ramblings. If Satan is watching, I have no doubt that He applauds you.
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2004, 10:10 PM
Donât decide anything yet.
Let âPeak Oilâ decide for you! 10
Let âPeak Oilâ decide for you! 10
on Holed by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Feb 2004, 11:11 AM
You brought me there.
I was right there with him. Perhaps I became him even.
In the beginning I could smell corn and bread.
Then you ripped me from the vision. Telling me that I couldnât smell.
Confused and disappointed I read on hoping there would be a way to get back the magic.
That somehow it would all make sense.
And then there was this,
âI havenât eaten it what appears to be over six daysâ
This poem could be grand. If onlyâ¦
I was right there with him. Perhaps I became him even.
In the beginning I could smell corn and bread.
Then you ripped me from the vision. Telling me that I couldnât smell.
Confused and disappointed I read on hoping there would be a way to get back the magic.
That somehow it would all make sense.
And then there was this,
âI havenât eaten it what appears to be over six daysâ
This poem could be grand. If onlyâ¦
on Everyone's choosing sides by zodiac
22 Feb 2004, 6:58 PM
Slightly left of center myself.
This is dead on! 10
This is dead on! 10
on The Winturd Tale of Sir Donald Nudesby by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
22 Feb 2004, 7:30 PM
This shit is so yesterday.
on Windows and Mirrors by fire blade
22 Feb 2004, 7:36 PM
Candy Man
Candy Man
Candy Man
Candy Man
Candy Man
on Mirrored Dream by Blindpoetry
22 Feb 2004, 8:16 PM
Candy Man x3
This is starting to freak me out.
This is starting to freak me out.
on February 22, 2004 by Pervy Elf
22 Feb 2004, 8:27 PM
You have perfectly related the truly pathetic nature of your spot in the world. 10!
on some deleted poem
25 Feb 2004, 12:29 PM
Time, my good friend, will all that's needful give.
on some deleted poem
2 Mar 2004, 11:47 AM
The better question
Why did our government lie
On forcing him out?
Why did our government lie
On forcing him out?
on some deleted poem
6 Mar 2004, 6:20 AM
<An unraveling> That's just what we need. Great Poem!
on some deleted poem
6 Mar 2004, 6:13 AM
Votre robinet est trop petit pour moi. Vous me rappelez Stephen, se reposant dans cette chaise. Et quelle est cette odeur ?
on It Won't Last Long by Spindle
2 Apr 2004, 8:04 PM
I feel the same way about my Uncle Sam.
on Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco
2 Apr 2004, 8:12 PM
I get it and it's good.
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2004, 9:47 PM
If this were mine I would drop s1 and 2. They're not needed. It certainly captures how I feel coming out of a long cold winter.
on some deleted poem
29 Jun 2005, 7:26 PM
Sounds like fishing to me.