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Notes toward a possible poem (Other) by Nicholas Jones attempting to think:
exploration of assumptions
declaration of elation
readmission of devotion
revelation of defection
devolution of confusion
recognition of competition
this is constant noise
mindless thinking
precludes thought
but leads to: transcendence?
not fucking likely in my lifetime
Up the ladder:
Daddy's Never There
Down the ladder:
thematic
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Posted: February 4, 2004 7:34 AM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2004 7:34 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7614 Comments:
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Lenore @ 64.252.108.73
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4-Feb-04/9:26 AM
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Suck factor- 10
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horus8 @ 24.126.116.54
> Lenore
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4-Feb-04/11:30 AM
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Hey, we can't help it if you live in a world full of dick mouth? I'd suggest, recognizing the fact, your poetry will never compete with this mans. how you dance around pretending that your opinion is based on talent, or wicca, or a mouthful of cock, is intriguing, but in the end, if you put your poems next to his? You'd be just another shitty new england writer, not that you aren't a fucking steaming mullosk already. Yeah, that's right cunt, I got your number now. fifty years of having me climb up your ass and remind you that I don't care for you at all, and in fact, I never did. that's why it's going to be such a pleasure reviewing everything you do for the rest of your days.
You will always be one of my favourites.
man my girlfriends like such a big ho /
so i killed her (feel bad for it, though!) / yeah it banged up her flesh, / but the body's still fresh - / if you're tempted, do give 'er a go! /
As he works up his lit'r'y extrusions,
Nick poeticisms all but a few shuns. But his substandard rank Is proof those who would wank Should stick to their real life protrusions.
"all but a few shuns" is inspired. Have an Aventinus and pommes klein on me.
last 4 lines are hard to read, the rest is fine. Certainly a classier poem about poetry.
It isn't supposed to be easy. But I'm glad you liked it.
not bad..heh funny last line.
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