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Notes toward a possible poem (Other) by Nicholas Jones

attempting to think: exploration of assumptions declaration of elation readmission of devotion revelation of defection devolution of confusion recognition of competition this is constant noise mindless thinking precludes thought but leads to: transcendence? not fucking likely in my lifetime

horus8 4-Feb-04/11:30 AM
Hey, we can't help it if you live in a world full of dick mouth? I'd suggest, recognizing the fact, your poetry will never compete with this mans. how you dance around pretending that your opinion is based on talent, or wicca, or a mouthful of cock, is intriguing, but in the end, if you put your poems next to his? You'd be just another shitty new england writer, not that you aren't a fucking steaming mullosk already. Yeah, that's right cunt, I got your number now. fifty years of having me climb up your ass and remind you that I don't care for you at all, and in fact, I never did. that's why it's going to be such a pleasure reviewing everything you do for the rest of your days.




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