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Mirrored Dream (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
I'm lost in the sand dunes Of the sand box The camels abandoned me To tired to walk back I dropped the knife and ran I ran back home To the forest But I got lost in the sand I want to spend time with you But now you’re dead Cold metal created your wounds And healed mine I kissed my wounds Thinking they were yours Just a mirror A mirror is controlling me I saw my reflection On the other side - it was me! How could this be possible? I thought I loved you more than me. I killed you in the mirrored dream.

Up the ladder: 03/30/04
Down the ladder: You Have It Backwards

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.285714
Weighted score: 5.0768404
Overall Rank: 6511
Posted: February 21, 2004 4:15 PM PST; Last modified: February 21, 2004 4:15 PM PST
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[n/a] Lenore @ 64.252.98.210 | 22-Feb-04/8:16 PM | Reply
Candy Man x3
This is starting to freak me out.
[8] zodiac @ 152.30.60.186 | 23-Feb-04/8:19 AM | Reply
Mirror shmirror. To, of course, should be too.
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