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Mirrored Dream (Pimple) by Blindpoetry I'm lost in the sand dunes
Of the sand box
The camels abandoned me
To tired to walk back
I dropped the knife and ran
I ran back home
To the forest
But I got lost in the sand
I want to spend time with you
But now youâre dead
Cold metal created your wounds
And healed mine
I kissed my wounds
Thinking they were yours
Just a mirror
A mirror is controlling me
I saw my reflection
On the other side - it was me!
How could this be possible?
I thought I loved you more than me.
I killed you in the mirrored dream.
Up the ladder:
03/30/04
Down the ladder:
Bare Feet
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Posted: February 21, 2004 4:15 PM PST; Last modified: February 21, 2004 4:15 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0768404 Overall Rank: 6514 Comments:
Mirror shmirror. To, of course, should be too.
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This is starting to freak me out.