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Mirrored Dream

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Feb 2004 · 2 comments

I'm lost in the sand dunes Of the sand box The camels abandoned me To tired to walk back I dropped the knife and ran I ran back home To the forest But I got lost in the sand I want to spend time with you But now you’re dead Cold metal created your wounds And healed mine I kissed my wounds Thinking they were yours Just a mirror A mirror is controlling me I saw my reflection On the other side - it was me! How could this be possible? I thought I loved you more than me. I killed you in the mirrored dream.

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[n/a] Lenore 22-Feb-04/8:16 PM Reply
Candy Man x3
This is starting to freak me out.
[8] zodiac 23-Feb-04/8:19 AM Reply
Mirror shmirror. To, of course, should be too.