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Celebration (Free verse) by Tchur
We touched in the silence of a recreated night
Our voices were murmurs lost in the forest dark
And the silence of our feet was as the silence of the sea.
We pressed on through the night which wove itself around us
Your soft hands were warm in the clutch of my fingers
And there was the sound of silver-throated birds
Echoing around over us.
We walked on through the fallen leaves
And tripped over lurking branches
There was no moonlight to guide us
Only the lonely shooting stars
It was cold; we pressed closer
The warmth of your waist in my palm
You naked scalp breathed cinnamon
The taste burning lightly in my throat
And rain began to fall about us
Soaking us 'til the cloth was almost melded to the skin.
I felt the warmth of your life
The pounding blood in your veins under my fingers
And heard the catch in your breath.
I kissed you then.
And then there was silence and more silence, and the copper taste of
blood
And the weight of your body in my arms
And the petal softness of your thighs
The taste of you, the touch of you, the quiet carvings of your nails
The deep smell of your open sex
And the drops of rain I kissed off your heaving breast.
There was the warmth of creation,
The steady pounding of new life
We mingled lips and limbs and locked
Our bodies and were one
And together in our passion
Together in our set desires
We celebrated the God of Spring.
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Posted: September 5, 2002 8:47 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2002 8:47 PM PDT
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