Tchur6 Sep 2002

Yes, I know it needs revision. 'Heaving' is godawful, and 'petal' almost as bad, but I couldn't think of other words that suited it. I used 'sex' because that line needed a single syllable, and I sure as hell wasn't going to use 'cunt'. As for the cinnamon thing... Sigh. Breathing is composed of two things: inhaling and exhaling. It's a fancy way of saying that this girl's shaved head smelt of cinnamon. That's all.