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I Am The Judge (Free verse) by gianni
I am the judge, The keeper of the gate. I am the guard, The guard of the people. I am the one who will lead you along, Guide you through the darkness and into the light. Take my hand so that I might embrace you, Let me kiss your cheek so that I can forgive you. And let me give you wings so you can fly. And let me teach you my lesson. If your'e crawling over a thousand lands, Or sinking in desert sands. Know this. It's hard to fly, But it's harder to land.

Up the ladder: You
Down the ladder: Celebration

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10504
Posted: August 26, 2002 12:37 AM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2002 1:53 AM PDT
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[n/a] god @ 213.122.194.149 | 26-Aug-02/1:47 AM | Reply
I don't want to fall out with you as I made you-I am the judge and it brings heavt responsibilities-nice poem though 8/10
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