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You (Free verse) by Butterflies
You always seem the same, you still say the same things. You still want the same things. Looking at things always the same way. Always wanting me to say. What you want me to say - what you want to hear. Why can't you leave what you want so desperatley. I don't want you - theres no way that this could be. The way you want it too. It's two different people you want to be the same. You keep on asking, I don't know how you can't see. Your not really real, it's not what you think is there. There's nothing between us there's nothing to say. Not enough to say, not enough to stay. There will be no other way. There's no you, no you and me, why can't you stop trying and just see? You say some and some you say not. It's sweet to say good-bye, and nothings there. But because your not getting what you want- it can't be the same. It won't ever be the same-the way it used to be.

Up the ladder: Alone
Down the ladder: I Am The Judge

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10497
Posted: August 21, 2002 11:19 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2002 11:19 PM PDT
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Comments:
[0] god'swife @ 209.179.134.216 | 21-Aug-02/11:39 PM | Reply
Well here's a whole lot of nothing to say.
[10] Fearlesfan_04 @ 129.66.1.202 | 24-Feb-05/6:35 PM | Reply
i love this one to... i can relate to it.....
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