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Free verse № 10535

You

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

You always seem the same, you still say the same things. You still want the same things. Looking at things always the same way. Always wanting me to say. What you want me to say - what you want to hear. Why can't you leave what you want so desperatley. I don't want you - theres no way that this could be. The way you want it too. It's two different people you want to be the same. You keep on asking, I don't know how you can't see. Your not really real, it's not what you think is there. There's nothing between us there's nothing to say. Not enough to say, not enough to stay. There will be no other way. There's no you, no you and me, why can't you stop trying and just see? You say some and some you say not. It's sweet to say good-bye, and nothings there. But because your not getting what you want- it can't be the same. It won't ever be the same-the way it used to be.

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[0] god'swife 21-Aug-02/11:39 PM Reply
Well here's a whole lot of nothing to say.
[10] Fearlesfan_04 24-Feb-05/6:35 PM Reply
i love this one to... i can relate to it.....