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Alone (Free verse) by NeeMan It is dark, and I need you.
It is dark, and I'm lonely.
It is dark, and I miss you.
It is dark.
It is hard, to be lonely.
It is hard, and I'm cold.
It is hard, and I greet you.
It is hard.
I'm in need, and I ask you.
I'm in need, do you care?
I'm in need, and I'm falling.
I'm in need.
I'm alone, and I feel it.
I'm alone, and I dare.
I'm alone, on a mission.
I'm alone.
Up the ladder:
Holy Union (a two speaker poem)
Down the ladder:
You
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Posted: August 20, 2002 6:31 AM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2002 6:31 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10496 Comments:
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20-Aug-02/8:11 AM
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hmm, the last words of each stanza: dark, hard, need, alone...does this activity require a magazine, and a box of tissues as well?
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