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Alone (Free verse) by NeeMan

It is dark, and I need you. It is dark, and I'm lonely. It is dark, and I miss you. It is dark. It is hard, to be lonely. It is hard, and I'm cold. It is hard, and I greet you. It is hard. I'm in need, and I ask you. I'm in need, do you care? I'm in need, and I'm falling. I'm in need. I'm alone, and I feel it. I'm alone, and I dare. I'm alone, on a mission. I'm alone.

<~> 20-Aug-02/8:11 AM
hmm, the last words of each stanza: dark, hard, need, alone...does this activity require a magazine, and a box of tissues as well?




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