on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2003, 11:44 AM
I've never seen snow (I've only lived in SF and Puerto Rico in my short life.) This poem makes me want to move to Utah and pee in the snow.
on She is A Lover Deep Within by Joe-joe
11 Dec 2003, 1:13 PM
cutesies
on The Spirit Of Giving by Miggy
11 Dec 2003, 1:39 PM
Bahumbug!
on Preserves for the basement (Poe Poetry) by Bachus
11 Dec 2003, 1:46 PM
lmao!
on Hurt by PunkyPanda
11 Dec 2003, 3:47 PM
0_o I'm lost. Ok, so you hurt someone and you feel guilty about it. BUT, the sight of them being happy makes you want to die?
on Let Go by PunkyPanda
11 Dec 2003, 3:54 PM
Well this is definitely better than your last piece. I totally know how it feels to want someone so bad even though you are fully aware they could care less. Still, it seems like a rant. Your ellipses is missing a third dot...
on Without you by Luv2write
12 Dec 2003, 10:06 PM
I don't think you mention "the light" enough times.
on diamond of love by crwncka1
12 Dec 2003, 10:07 PM
What did I just read?
on What I really needed by Shardik
12 Dec 2003, 10:10 PM
Nice and simple.
on some deleted poem
12 Dec 2003, 10:13 PM
I prefer the smell of Lever 2000.
on Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom
13 Dec 2003, 8:15 PM
"buying your wife another diamond ring." What the hell does she need another one for!? I know diamonds are a girl's best friend but she should be content already with the wedding ring.
on Little Bird by Blindpoetry
21 Dec 2003, 7:36 PM
Oh, Little Bird
I don't want to see you dead
A feathery pile of green and white turd
How I'd miss you shitting on my head
I don't want to see you dead
A feathery pile of green and white turd
How I'd miss you shitting on my head
on My friend over there (the Mirror) by reo316
23 Dec 2003, 11:49 PM
I really like how you worded your last two lines. Solid work.
on It's lonely at the top by Jeremi B. Handrinos
24 Dec 2003, 11:04 PM
ha! what a dork. Not God, you. -8-
on Weep In Me by blueyes
29 Dec 2003, 7:22 PM
make sure you weep with a condom on!
on The Fire of My Mind by RubyDragonKnight
1 Jan 2004, 10:55 PM
Valium works better.
on Belabourin' Jack by middenHeap
2 Jan 2004, 1:07 PM
Reading this made me cup my balls...I enjoyed it
on some deleted poem
2 Jan 2004, 9:53 PM
*groans* The whole world doesn't treat the holiday with disgrace because the whole world does not celebrate Christmas. I think this comes across as a little too preachy. Your message of people needing to acknowledge the holiday's true meaning is important enough to write about. Still, I think it could be done in a better way.
on some deleted poem
2 Jan 2004, 9:59 PM
This reads like a bad hallmark card.
on Offence by Stephen Robins
10 Feb 2004, 9:14 PM
Yum.