Re: Few Too Little by talking_goldfish	20-Aug-02/9:00 AM
Dumb yanks. I'd say something to the effect of "Don't mind them, they're still mad from when we burned down the white house", but the poem just isn't that great. Still, "dumb yanks".
Re: Belongings by Christof	20-Aug-02/7:05 AM
That's nice. I like it and I like schnapps.
Re: Devil, BEWARE!!! by gay	19-Aug-02/1:17 PM
New levels of something....not quite sure what the something is. Learn to spell, god damn you!
Re: Just Another Day by dougsoderstrom	17-Aug-02/3:48 PM
this is nice. I like it. Why the copyrights, though?
Re: tears beyond hope by Mystifying	17-Aug-02/12:46 PM
But what about htose other great words:"alot" (spelled as one word)and the endearment "Baby"? They deserve "laughed till I peed then booted the author in the buttocks" award too. "alls" is fantastic. i sport publik edekashun..
Re: Earthly Delights? by razorgrin	17-Aug-02/12:07 PM
The title came from the poster of the bosch painting that was the first thing I saw every day. I will edit, but now I am mostly working on another fiendish project.
Re: Earthly Delights? by razorgrin	17-Aug-02/11:50 AM
A rewrite may happen. This thing came out of the madness of last year, which featured: the shittiest job ever, professors made of pure evil and 4 hours of sleep a night and their ensuing hallucinations.
Re: For my darling Lori by Twisted Wizard	16-Aug-02/5:10 PM
She's too good for you, you pathetic little man.
Re: fear by pitchblackdisaster	16-Aug-02/4:43 PM
Cthulhu would be offended.
Re: odd star by pitchblackdisaster	16-Aug-02/4:42 PM
This is utter shit. Learn to use punctuation, dammit. Also, for your idiotic and cliched use of angel imagery, you should be skinned alive.
Re: devil by pitchblackdisaster	16-Aug-02/4:35 PM
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
Re: devil by pitchblackdisaster	16-Aug-02/4:35 PM
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
Re: Strange but true by ==Doylum	15-Aug-02/11:21 AM
genius, as always. brightened up an otherwise shitty day.
Re: When I Sleep Alone by Jody Conn	15-Aug-02/8:46 AM
I'm "sire" he did, Robert.
Re: Let's praise the flesh peddler by horus8	14-Aug-02/6:02 AM
This is really goddamn good. wow and stuff.
Re: Drowning by kat_boost	14-Aug-02/5:54 AM
This is just runny, poorly-applied eyeliner, a black t-shirt for that "mall-goth" effect and a 16-year-old screaming at her parents about how "no one understands". Bah.
Re: Walls by razorgrin	13-Aug-02/12:12 PM
Poetandknowit, you're too kind. you're such a stern daddy figure, helping us poor plebians with our little poems. It's not that you don't coddle, it's that you're a self-righteous, blowhard with no talent backing up his pretentious little words.
Re: Walls by razorgrin	13-Aug-02/12:03 PM
Darling, your brilliant use of the English language astounds me."Drivel" is a noun, not a verb. What on Earth is your degree in? Business? I'm sure you were at the top of your class at the Sad Redneck Community College, really you were. you said you'd voice your precious little opinion and move on.I'm waiting. You must be very mature for your age- what are you, 19? The object of the site is to discuss poetry as you said (so observant!you get a special short-bus, rubber-undies head-pat!), so why are you doing nothing more than writing your "deep" "hip" little snippets of your dramatic little life and bragging about the fact that you took English in college. English is for useless failed writers. you should have taken some real courses.
Re: Winged Beauty by ThoughtfulSoul	13-Aug-02/10:58 AM
Yes, though this needs polishing, it's good deep down. Don't worry about "poetandknowit", he's a pompous, pretentious bastard who seems to have deemed himself the most knowing and mature "poet" on the site, and therefore it's his job to ensure creeping postmodernism and to keep all the comments on topic. He is,in short, a wannabe dictator, poorly endowed and lacking in social skills.
Re: good-bye kansas city: meditation #1 by poetandknowit	13-Aug-02/10:26 AM
meaningless tripe. There are so many others like this it is not worthy of notice.