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odd star (Free verse) by pitchblackdisaster
the odd star can soon come shooting past, and you make a wish in which you hope shall last' you've travelled far and still been near, the day is dawning and still you dont hear, the angels fall their wings collapse, but not everything you wish for will allways last

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.282823
Overall Rank: 13133
Posted: August 16, 2002 3:52 AM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2002 3:52 AM PDT
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[0] poetandknowit @ 67.40.59.66 | 16-Aug-02/8:00 AM | Reply
Send this off to Disney.
[n/a] pitchblackdisaster @ | 16-Aug-02/11:13 AM | Reply
why send it off to disney? im sure that all they would do is just look at it strangely and then take my age into their thaughts and think that i am weird.
[1] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.175 | 16-Aug-02/4:42 PM | Reply
This is utter shit. Learn to use punctuation, dammit. Also, for your idiotic and cliched use of angel imagery, you should be skinned alive.
[n/a] pitchblackdisaster @ | 17-Aug-02/8:21 AM | Reply
i am only young i am still in school for gods sake so dont give me a lecture on punctuation cos ive had enough of it from my bastard teachers.and as for angels i would be glad to let you have the pleasure to skin me alive cos i dont realy care anymore ok?
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-Aug-02/1:51 AM | Reply
to take the time!
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