poemranker ::You strike me by Butterflies

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Free verse № 10280

You strike me

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

One night on, a different story. One night on in all your glory. Your just a stranger who I seem to feel, from all my mysteries you heal. You seemed so right, something was there. You felt it, I felt it - it was in the air. It seemed so right, it was so right...both of us during the night. You strike me as something You strike me as someone I don't know what it is, Your just you. It's so hard to get my head around What was always there - inwood bound. You were there, you were my way - I wish it were still that day. You strike me as something You strike me as someone I don't know what it is, Your just you.

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[9] Jarah 21-Aug-02/12:33 AM Reply
I dont care what other people think but i think ur poem was kewl, from the heart.. not many people care about that stuff.. so we gotta get out there and tell them how we dont care about their gay verses.. lol ':-)