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You strike me (Free verse) by Butterflies
One night on, a different story. One night on in all your glory. Your just a stranger who I seem to feel, from all my mysteries you heal. You seemed so right, something was there. You felt it, I felt it - it was in the air. It seemed so right, it was so right...both of us during the night. You strike me as something You strike me as someone I don't know what it is, Your just you. It's so hard to get my head around What was always there - inwood bound. You were there, you were my way - I wish it were still that day. You strike me as something You strike me as someone I don't know what it is, Your just you.

Up the ladder: odd star
Down the ladder: Wanting

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.282823
Overall Rank: 13145
Posted: August 20, 2002 11:27 PM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2002 11:27 PM PDT
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[9] Jarah @ 24.164.123.105 | 21-Aug-02/12:33 AM | Reply
I dont care what other people think but i think ur poem was kewl, from the heart.. not many people care about that stuff.. so we gotta get out there and tell them how we dont care about their gay verses.. lol ':-)
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