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Wanting (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly The world don't want me here
No one wants to see
How beautiful I really am
And how wonderful I can be
They just see a girl
Thats depressed and sad
And doesn't know the meaning of being glad
But on the inside shes slowly dying from being alone
No one notices or calls on the phone
All she wants is someone to love
She used to think that love was from above
But shes lost her faith, it is no more
She'll never find the love, shes truly longing for.
Up the ladder:
You strike me
Down the ladder:
One
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Posted: November 13, 2002 2:08 PM PST; Last modified: November 13, 2002 2:08 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.282823 Overall Rank: 13146 Comments:
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30-Nov-02/4:37 PM
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its good but i really dont like the line "she used to think that love was from above" it throws the whole thing off for me. good poem tho i really like the begining 7
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