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odd star (Free verse) by pitchblackdisaster

the odd star can soon come shooting past, and you make a wish in which you hope shall last' you've travelled far and still been near, the day is dawning and still you dont hear, the angels fall their wings collapse, but not everything you wish for will allways last

pitchblackdisaster 17-Aug-02/8:21 AM
i am only young i am still in school for gods sake so dont give me a lecture on punctuation cos ive had enough of it from my bastard teachers.and as for angels i would be glad to let you have the pleasure to skin me alive cos i dont realy care anymore ok?




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