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odd star (Free verse) by pitchblackdisaster

the odd star can soon come shooting past, and you make a wish in which you hope shall last' you've travelled far and still been near, the day is dawning and still you dont hear, the angels fall their wings collapse, but not everything you wish for will allways last

razorgrin 16-Aug-02/4:42 PM
This is utter shit. Learn to use punctuation, dammit. Also, for your idiotic and cliched use of angel imagery, you should be skinned alive.




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