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good-bye kansas city: meditation #1 (Free verse) by poetandknowit stoplight.
39th and Broadway
I reach to kiss you
just like always
just like before
but only fall to the seat.
A lady in a bright blue civic
smiles big.
Up the ladder:
:)
Down the ladder:
Dear Lord
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.8333333
Posted: August 12, 2002 10:36 AM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2002 12:45 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.8886635 Overall Rank: 13453 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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12-Aug-02/5:37 PM
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Slam~Champ aye. I once seen a tornado. It was in Kansas. People died. I smiled like that bitch in your poem. Big!
all right p&k. i'll give it up for this one. i'm smiling big now.
meaningless tripe. There are so many others like this it is not worthy of notice.
See previous comment about seeking some education. Enjambment is a useful poetic device, but chopping a poorly written sentence into three word statements is not high art.
Astonishingly poor, this didnt pop my pimple at all.
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