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good-bye kansas city: meditation #1

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2002 · Edited 12 Aug 2002 · 5 comments

stoplight. 39th and Broadway I reach to kiss you just like always just like before but only fall to the seat. A lady in a bright blue civic smiles big.

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[7] Bachus 12-Aug-02/5:37 PM Reply

Slam~Champ aye. I once seen a tornado. It was in Kansas. People died. I smiled like that bitch in your poem. Big!

[8] <~> 12-Aug-02/5:57 PM Reply

all right p&k. i'll give it up for this one. i'm smiling big now.

[0] razorgrin 13-Aug-02/10:26 AM Reply

meaningless tripe. There are so many others like this it is not worthy of notice.

[10] limonade 13-Aug-02/11:31 AM Reply

See previous comment about seeking some education. Enjambment is a useful poetic device, but chopping a poorly written sentence into three word statements is not high art.

[0] Caducus 2-Apr-03/5:29 AM Reply

Astonishingly poor, this didnt pop my pimple at all.