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good-bye kansas city: meditation #1 (Free verse) by poetandknowit

stoplight. 39th and Broadway I reach to kiss you just like always just like before but only fall to the seat. A lady in a bright blue civic smiles big.

limonade 13-Aug-02/11:31 AM
See previous comment about seeking some education. Enjambment is a useful poetic device, but chopping a poorly written sentence into three word statements is not high art.




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