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Earthly Delights? (Free verse) by razorgrin
It's likebeing sunk deep into the flesh
of some gigantic rotten fruit.
Sticky-sweet nauseating pulpy flesh surrounds you
the world-juice seeps into your mouth,your pores,
your every orifice.
At first it tastes sweet, almost inviting, but very quickly
the thick, dark taste of rot coats your tongue
a sudden realization, two vital things
The First: you cannot get out. Sick-sweet fruit sucks you
down, squelching obscenely.
The Second:All around you, eating, fucking and shitting
are maggots.Unlike other maggots, however,
these will never become flies and leave.
They will stay here foever, squirming, rejoicing in the decay.
One may lean over, latching on to you, slurping down your blood along
with the fermented fruit ichor.
The final shock will be when you look down and see your soft white
larval body.
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Weighted score: 4.1742525
Overall Rank: 13250
Posted: June 21, 2002 8:21 AM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2002 8:21 AM PDT
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