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#4 (Haiku) by mikejedw
Patches of thick grass, Islands on a turbid lake-- are these grubs the fish?
Up the ladder: Eggshells in Wet Grass
Down the ladder: Earthly Delights?
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0625
Weighted score: 4.1742525
Overall Rank: 13249
Posted: May 13, 2002 7:14 AM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2002 7:14 AM PDT
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[6]... anonymous @ 62.254.32.4 | 19-May-02/12:55 AM | Reply
don't get this, disappointing as I love your haiku so far ..
i mean I can see it but duno why..
and turbid is wasted
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