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Eggshells in Wet Grass (Free verse) by ObiWonKn Tied to
Shy of
Blanketed around
Speak softly?
Eggshells
In wet grass
When spring has sprung
And I have spread my wings
Up the ladder:
stupid
Down the ladder:
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.1742525 Overall Rank: 13248 Comments:
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7-Aug-01/2:22 PM
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I like the way the first four lines build a feeling of hesitance. Works well.
interesting. i find my thoughts dancing through it. :)
I dont get that one.
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