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Eggshells in Wet Grass
(
Free verse
) by
ObiWonKn
Tied to Shy of Blanketed around Speak softly? Eggshells In wet grass When spring has sprung And I have spread my wings
anonymous
7-Aug-01/2:22 PM
I like the way the first four lines build a feeling of hesitance. Works well.
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