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#4 (Haiku) by mikejedw

Patches of thick grass, Islands on a turbid lake-- are these grubs the fish?

anonymous 19-May-02/12:55 AM
don't get this, disappointing as I love your haiku so far ..
i mean I can see it but duno why..
and turbid is wasted




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