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When I Sleep Alone (Free verse) by Jody Conn
When I Sleep Alone I hear your whispers I feel you breath I taste your lips When I Sleep Alone I long for you I miss your body I miss your touch When I Sleep Alone I share no thoughts I have an empty heart I hold my desires When I Sleep Alone I envelope you I taste you I make love to you When I Sleep Alone I can feel your fingers on me I can feel you lips tease me I can feel your lips surround me When I Sleep Alone I can feel your thighs I can feel your moistness I can feel us explode together jc062601

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5686274
Weighted score: 5.568627
Overall Rank: 2433
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:18 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:18 AM PST
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[4]... anonymous @ | 27-Jun-01/6:18 PM | Reply
gets the point across, I liked the way you used repetition to emphasize
[4]... anonymous @ | 28-Jun-01/8:20 AM | Reply
this is from the touch screen at Soda Hall. I'll leave it on screen:)
[4]... anonymous @ | 29-Jun-01/12:52 PM | Reply
I relate...
[4]... anonymous @ | 15-Jul-01/10:45 PM | Reply
I know this feeling all too well....long distance relationships suck! But this is good :)
[1] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.11 | 15-Aug-02/8:38 AM | Reply
I'm sire you meant "envelop"--unless you were planning to mail them somewhere :)
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.106.42 | 15-Aug-02/8:46 AM | Reply
I'm "sire" he did, Robert.
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