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Free verse № 267

When I Sleep Alone

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 6 comments

When I Sleep Alone I hear your whispers I feel you breath I taste your lips When I Sleep Alone I long for you I miss your body I miss your touch When I Sleep Alone I share no thoughts I have an empty heart I hold my desires When I Sleep Alone I envelope you I taste you I make love to you When I Sleep Alone I can feel your fingers on me I can feel you lips tease me I can feel your lips surround me When I Sleep Alone I can feel your thighs I can feel your moistness I can feel us explode together jc062601

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[4] anonymous 27-Jun-01/6:18 PM Reply
gets the point across, I liked the way you used repetition to emphasize
[4] anonymous 28-Jun-01/8:20 AM Reply
this is from the touch screen at Soda Hall. I'll leave it on screen:)
[4] anonymous 29-Jun-01/12:52 PM Reply
I relate...
[4] anonymous 15-Jul-01/10:45 PM Reply
I know this feeling all too well....long distance relationships suck! But this is good :)
[1] Robert K Foster 15-Aug-02/8:38 AM Reply
I'm sire you meant "envelop"--unless you were planning to mail them somewhere :)
[n/a] razorgrin 15-Aug-02/8:46 AM Reply
I'm "sire" he did, Robert.