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devil (Free verse) by pitchblackdisaster he is the devil,
you better beware,
he will come in your dreams,
TO MAKE THEM A NIGHTMARE
Up the ladder:
Grace
Down the ladder:
9/11
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 2.1111112
Posted: August 16, 2002 3:58 AM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2002 3:58 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.5555556 Overall Rank: 13588 Comments:
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16-Aug-02/6:11 AM
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you better not pout, you better not cry, you better not shout, i'm telling you why...
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
what do u mean?
it's so fucking crucial
this has gotta be da or z or settle, playing around right...come on people..this is borderlne disturbing. da please tell me you're gonna jump out of the cake...right? if not i'll never stick up for a blonde being stereo typed again, or stick one period for that matter
you make no sense please exsplain more clearly.
This has no merit at all. 0. The language is dull and unimaginative, and to have the final line in caps simply highlights how hard the poem must work in order to grab the reader's attention before it thankfully ends. I'm afraid there are no positives to mention, aside from the fact that it is mercifully short.
A Poopmare, in vivid zero dimension.
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