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Free verse № 9267

devil

by pitchblackdisaster

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Aug 2002 · 9 comments

he is the devil, you better beware, he will come in your dreams, TO MAKE THEM A NIGHTMARE

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[2] deleted user 16-Aug-02/6:11 AM Reply
you better not pout, you better not cry, you better not shout, i'm telling you why...
[0] razorgrin 16-Aug-02/4:35 PM Reply
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
[0] razorgrin 16-Aug-02/4:35 PM Reply
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
[n/a] pitchblackdisaster 17-Aug-02/8:15 AM Reply
what do u mean?
[0] Bachus 19-Aug-02/1:50 AM Reply
it's so fucking crucial
[0] Bachus 19-Aug-02/1:55 AM Reply
this has gotta be da or z or settle, playing around right...come on people..this is borderlne disturbing. da please tell me you're gonna jump out of the cake...right? if not i'll never stick up for a blonde being stereo typed again, or stick one period for that matter
[n/a] pitchblackdisaster 19-Aug-02/6:27 AM Reply
you make no sense please exsplain more clearly.
[0] Tarquin De La Bog 19-Aug-02/2:10 PM Reply
This has no merit at all. 0. The language is dull and unimaginative, and to have the final line in caps simply highlights how hard the poem must work in order to grab the reader's attention before it thankfully ends. I'm afraid there are no positives to mention, aside from the fact that it is mercifully short.
[0] Jeremi B. Handrinos 9-Nov-03/5:57 AM Reply
A Poopmare, in vivid zero dimension.