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devil (Free verse) by pitchblackdisaster
he is the devil, you better beware, he will come in your dreams, TO MAKE THEM A NIGHTMARE

Up the ladder: hate
Down the ladder: AIDS in a van

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.4444444
Weighted score: 3.2222223
Overall Rank: 13613
Posted: August 16, 2002 3:58 AM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2002 3:58 AM PDT
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Comments:
[2] deleted user @ 167.206.181.179 | 16-Aug-02/6:11 AM | Reply
you better not pout, you better not cry, you better not shout, i'm telling you why...
[0] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.175 | 16-Aug-02/4:35 PM | Reply
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
[0] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.175 | 16-Aug-02/4:35 PM | Reply
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
[n/a] pitchblackdisaster @ | 17-Aug-02/8:15 AM | Reply
what do u mean?
[0] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-Aug-02/1:50 AM | Reply
it's so fucking crucial
[0] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-Aug-02/1:55 AM | Reply
this has gotta be da or z or settle, playing around right...come on people..this is borderlne disturbing. da please tell me you're gonna jump out of the cake...right? if not i'll never stick up for a blonde being stereo typed again, or stick one period for that matter
[n/a] pitchblackdisaster @ | 19-Aug-02/6:27 AM | Reply
you make no sense please exsplain more clearly.
[0] Tarquin De La Bog @ 213.1.45.14 | 19-Aug-02/2:10 PM | Reply
This has no merit at all. 0. The language is dull and unimaginative, and to have the final line in caps simply highlights how hard the poem must work in order to grab the reader's attention before it thankfully ends. I'm afraid there are no positives to mention, aside from the fact that it is mercifully short.
[0] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 9-Nov-03/5:57 AM | Reply
A Poopmare, in vivid zero dimension.
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