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devil (Free verse) by pitchblackdisaster

he is the devil, you better beware, he will come in your dreams, TO MAKE THEM A NIGHTMARE

Tarquin De La Bog 19-Aug-02/2:10 PM
This has no merit at all. 0. The language is dull and unimaginative, and to have the final line in caps simply highlights how hard the poem must work in order to grab the reader's attention before it thankfully ends. I'm afraid there are no positives to mention, aside from the fact that it is mercifully short.




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