Re: Thursday by w~* ATHENA *~w	31-Jan-03/9:34 AM
I like seeing the very deformed. They amuse me.
Re: Amelioration is only relative by Freethinker1602	31-Jan-03/9:37 AM
Enter, readers at your own riske, for here there be angst. And shab-ass angst at that.
Re: The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602	31-Jan-03/9:39 AM
The redeeming part was the "know my pian" bit. Funniest twist ever. All this time I was reading what looked like a Serious and Heartfelt Poeme, but pian was a great satirical twist. Of course if it really is just a typo, that makes you an illiterate fucktard.
Re: Equality by Freethinker1602	31-Jan-03/9:42 AM
Aww..and you even think we care about your sad sad pain of runny eyeliner...here's a zero-flavoured lollipop.
Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik	31-Jan-03/11:55 AM
Very nice. I go for walks through shoulder-high snowbanks. It's dark and echoey.
Re: For Brianna by MaliqaTara	31-Jan-03/12:00 PM
The sincerity of the emotion comes through really well. As a poem, it has some technical flaws, but not to any huge degree. I'm not even going to say anything blasphemous because of the religious content. Needs a little polishing, but has some shine already.
Re: Jesus rides the comet by Shardik	31-Jan-03/12:03 PM
Damn fine. quality use of imagery. "Dracula sold out to the japanese" and "Atlas shrugs, I guess he's got the clap again" are mighty good. splendiferous
Re: NASA Fireworks by TheDevil	2-Feb-03/4:30 PM
Explosions rock. Icarian joy and gladness.
Re: American Idol epiphany in haiku by Shardik	2-Feb-03/4:33 PM
that's it in a nutshell. an appropriate receptacle. 10. rock on.
Re: Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus	2-Feb-03/4:36 PM
What about the Silver surfer?
Re: Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	2-Feb-03/4:43 PM
nice addition.
Re: Kaolin Fire is SHIT by poemwanker	3-Feb-03/9:04 AM
Wuv!
Re: Feeling by chicka_babe05	4-Feb-03/10:34 AM
"state of selfhood"? What the hell is that supposed to mean? Seriously, though, your eloquent and moving use of "you" to rhyme with "you" shall surely put you solidly into our grand poetic tradition. You may even dethrone shakespeare! One thing, though: wouldn't the touch of someone's eyes be all squishy and gooey? Not to mention painful for the other person. Lastly, leave God out of this poeme. I asked the big guy, YH-to-the-VH about you and he said, "Never heard of her." Then he fell back asleep. However, the archangel Jibreel did say that you deserve a zero for this lump of solidified porcupine smegma. Who am I to defy divine will
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Feb-03/10:46 AM
Incidentally, "your" isn't interchangeable with "you're". "Thru" isn't a real word. The word you're looking for in Stanza 3 line3 is "aback". Stanza 4 line 3 should be "anything", not "any thing". Stanza 4 line 1, "it's" not "its". Stanza 4 line 2 "would have knew" makes no fucking sense. Stanza 5, line 3, "that's" not "Thats". All that and you need to use commas properly. And the poeme doesn't scan for crap. Finally, it's just bad. No subtlety or metaphor, just emoting, which is dull. I will read the Bardo Thodol for your uncle and hope he will be free from samsara. gate gate panagate....but still a zero for the living.
Re: An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos	4-Feb-03/10:56 AM
Drow?
Re: The Grapes of Wrath by ==Doylum	4-Feb-03/11:00 AM
bumtastic.
Re: What the runes said by INTRANSIT	4-Feb-03/11:03 AM
That's an odd coincidence, ==doylum. I was just watching Bill & Ted's excellent adventure. I like the freud jokes best.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Feb-03/11:06 AM
Now, now, we just don't talk about joe blades.(did you know he has a radio show?) Anyway, back to chanting...
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Feb-03/6:48 AM
Bunny, if you don't want your tripe ranked, don't post it on pomRANKER. got it? Good. If you want to emote, do so, by all means, but if you put it up on a site that critiques writing, you'd better write it well, or someone will call you on it. I focused on the gaping technical flaws in this glob of grief-masturbation because I was trying to maintain some respect for the dead. You can't write for shit, that's all there is to it. I don't adhere too much to the dictionary, but I don't think it's kryptonite either. There's nothing wrong with you that education and maybe ECT wouldn't fix. Your feelings can be used productively, just learn to put them down better. There's nothing wrong with that. There's no need to take it as a personal attack. You don't need to make any toward me either.I did read the Bardo Thodol for your uncle, though. I hope it helped. I am sorry about your loss. P.S.As far as the 'thru' thing goes, a bunch of morons who can't spell doesn't make a non-word valid. Hugs 'n' kisses!
Re: Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom	10-Feb-03/6:52 AM
Wow, I'm in a poeme! I'm flattered!