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20 most recent comments by razorgrin (201-220)

Re: Just Die Already... by loneshadow29 23-Jan-03/1:43 PM
Ow! The angst! That hurt. I think blades of steel might cause agony. The seat of the soul is not in the heart. for the last time,it's in the left buttock. As for the last line, that's pretty much the advice I'm trying to give you, gothboy. Oh...don't cry. Here, have a kleenex, your eyeliner's running.
Re: What's the Point of Love? by loneshadow29 23-Jan-03/1:46 PM
The point of love? From a strictly biological standpoint, that particular combo of endorphins is to ensure that our genes will be passed on. Then you get into that other stuff. I'd normally say,"don't worry hon, you'll find someone right for you one day", but you likely won't. remember, "the only constant in all your failed relationships is you." Hugs 'n' zeros!
Re: Hinged by Imperfections 23-Jan-03/1:47 PM
If you're having trouble squeezing through, a little fisting will loosen that up.:D
regarding some deleted poem... 25-Jan-03/9:13 PM
bums bums bums! yay, nudefulness!
regarding some deleted poem... 25-Jan-03/9:15 PM
naughty naughty.
Re: Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 28-Jan-03/10:59 AM
Definitely needs a third. more alchemy poems please, but possibly get into the topic a little more.
regarding some deleted poem... 28-Jan-03/11:04 AM
"beelselbob"?! What the unholy flaming +2 fuck? Learn to spell, you son of an orc! Also, too jesus-y. Suicide is a mortal sin, you know. Ask the good folks in the Wood Of Suicides in Dante's Divine Comedy. I hope you make a better pain-tree than you do a poete. I send my imp familiar to deliver this 0 of wounding to you. Yes, it is a touch attack.
regarding some deleted poem... 28-Jan-03/11:06 AM
It is simple, bunnygirl, but in the short-bus, mittens-on-strings-in-july, rubber pants sort of way.
Re: Mom And Dad by thepinkbunnyofdoom 28-Jan-03/11:14 AM
"Like, ohmygawd, my parents are SOOO unfair!! They won't let me out to do crystal meth on a school night and they even say I wear too much makeup! Ohmygawd, I'm like so totally pissed. I'm going to make really half-assed inarticulate poemes about how I want to kill them!" Kiddo, you write like a nu-metal Charlie Manson. Except I doubt you could get any followers. Tell you what. I'll take you out on a nice Hot Topic shopping spree and then drive you up to the mall where you can scare the preppie normals. Cheer up, Buttercup! What exactly is a 'massacure'? A really bad manicure? Oh, yeah, I know. It's the result of a Grade 8 American public school education. Here, a zero of spoooky ragin' teenage angst.
Re: The Galenoi Saga by galiana 28-Jan-03/11:19 AM
Not bad. Not the highlight of my life, but not bad. Bunnybrat, do you even know more than one story from Greek mythology?
Re: Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 28-Jan-03/11:28 AM
Yeah, I played through Chrono Trigger yesterday. The issue, buddaboy, is that you make monumentally foolish statements on subjects you know nothing about. Don't read a poem and complain that the really obvious references are over your head. Just stick to the shallow end next time.
Re: Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 28-Jan-03/11:29 AM
Also, monk-man, did you misspell Buddha deliberately or was it due to the unfortunate positioning of your head in your sphincter at the time you first logged on?
Re: Spring Rolls by Ranger 29-Jan-03/6:38 AM
We had spring rolls on New year's eve. As opposed to my longpig suggestion. I dig spring as a season, though not as an odour. 8, as it caused me to think of at least two things while reading it.
Re: Mannequin (draft) by Ranger 29-Jan-03/6:40 AM
Nice, Pygmalion getting very frustrated. The violence is very well done, which is rare.
Re: rememberance of things past by keatsImnot 29-Jan-03/6:42 AM
Eww..nationalism and poor writing. Fail!
Re: Breaking Away by wickedemon4 29-Jan-03/6:45 AM
Well, that was quite the angst-wank. Surprised you could keep it up as long as you did. Go put on some damn clearasil.
regarding some deleted poem... 30-Jan-03/12:53 PM
More stories please.
Re: The Sunset Blvd. Cabbage limericks by Shardik 30-Jan-03/12:54 PM
Mmm..soy lattes.
Re: Love spank by Shardik 30-Jan-03/12:56 PM
Absolutely Splendid! You're awfully pushy for a bottom, though. you know what impertinence means....To the rack! you can take this 10 with you, though.
regarding some deleted poem... 30-Jan-03/12:57 PM
Needs work, but it has potential.


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