Re: Magick Fingers of Love by Wulf	10-Feb-03/9:49 AM
Well that was an experience. a wise-ish man once said "those who spell magic with a 'k' aren't." I agree.
Re: Pain by Teen14	10-Feb-03/9:55 AM
Yes, there needs to be more. Content, specifically. hope your chick doesn't die.
Re: Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom	10-Feb-03/12:56 PM
you are such a CUUUUUTE little thing. I wrote more perversions for you.
Re: nightly by <~>	10-Feb-03/1:13 PM
yep, that was how I spent last night.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Feb-03/1:15 PM
that's awful. but funny.
Re: Truth by strider1	10-Feb-03/1:18 PM
The truth is: "I am suffering from menstrual cramps." there you go. Don't worry about humanity. it's teetering on the edge anyway. (I plan on giving it a push next week, shh..)
Re: Lindsey's Ballad by thepinkbunnyofdoom	11-Feb-03/9:54 AM
There's a lot of cliche in the language ("caged bird")bit, but if you polished it a little, it could be good.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Feb-03/1:06 PM
Delightful, hun. My favourite is the Freud one.
Re: Boddhistava by Enki	13-Feb-03/10:40 AM
This thing made me think of the song "Obey the Cow God" by green jelly. but the poeme rocked less.
Re: Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/12:50 PM
When (1) + man(1) + uses(2) + a(1) + flame(1)= 6. (a)You can't count, assmachine. (b)Dumb statement worthy only of "proverbs for dummies" books. (c)Poorly written, overall. Therefore, a zero.
Re: The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/12:52 PM
Chirpe, indeede. Trying to be meaningful and deep, but comes out like a puddle of hedgehog piss. Fail.
Re: Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/12:53 PM
Milk is gross.
Re: Curse by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/12:56 PM
Childish rhyme scheme, boring mssage. Did you keep repeating "poet" so much to convince yourself that you actually are one? Man, I'm glad I don't have to worry about a poet's cusre. Oh, The Pain (tm) of onefingeruphiass's Deep Inexpressible Feelings(tm)!
Re: The Boys and Girls Club of London by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/12:59 PM
this had potential until the use of 'bod' to rhyme with "god". I had to take a break to finish giggling.
Re: Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/1:01 PM
I certainly don't dispute that statement.
Re: Beauty, sleeping by Ranger	13-Feb-03/1:05 PM
Kind of all over the place. The lines "hurl lettuces And fairies They cast a spell at me" cracked me up, though.
Re: Languageing by ==Doylum	13-Feb-03/1:14 PM
neato.
Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/1:21 PM
impressive images.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Feb-03/1:26 PM
nice one. I love the "roam my cortex" bit. I love it more than I love toast.
Re: Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/1:27 PM
true.