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20 most recent comments by razorgrin (141-160)

Re: For you, I'd make meatloaf by Venus 13-Feb-03/9:00 PM
Clever. The use of food is brilliant. Food symbolism is wondrous.
Re: Atonement by aperfecttool77 18-Feb-03/1:51 PM
I'm sorry you were conceived, mr.tool. I speak that utterly sincerely. the world would be just a little sunnier if not only that poeme, but you and everything connected to you didn't exist. BOO! Boo-urns!
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Feb-03/6:28 AM
Lesbians are hardly outside the comprehension of society. They've been a prominent-ish fixture since Sappho and right on until now. No one sees them as outre anymore. They're used as a standard device to seem kinky and hot by the media. All that said, that is really shab lesbian poeme. Did nothin' for me.
Re: Forbidden Fruit by thepinkbunnyofdoom 17-Feb-03/6:38 AM
This needs work."Curse my name on public streets" is a good line, however, the one that follows makes me think of obscene phone calls.
Re: Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13-Feb-03/8:47 PM
if you tried to edit it, you failed miserably.(b),that is the most shab-ass grade school attempt at a comeback I've ever read. worse than the rubber/glue thing. The poeme is bad. face it. last, I will continue to rank how I choose, sir.
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Feb-03/9:43 AM
Yes, as limonade and I are compiling them using the format of the vagina monologues and interviewing assorted penis-bearers. so don't take our feckin' ideas or i'll cutcha.
Re: Weekend at the Taj by <~> 19-Feb-03/1:27 PM
Fantastic. just fantastic.
Re: Eros, and Psycho by horus8 21-Feb-03/6:34 AM
peculiar. i can dig it.
Re: On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels 18-Feb-03/1:35 PM
I'm sorry.
Re: On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels 18-Feb-03/10:46 AM
You can eat the kids too. Use the same recipes as for pork, but apparently the palms of the hands are particularly good fried. On the whole, though, you can't go wrong with stir-frying. NEVER eat human brains, though.
Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 18-Feb-03/10:42 AM
Groovin'. Chive-tastic. All I get is the drunk/junkie homeless doing their thing in the graveyard across the street from my place. Maybe I should offer chives?
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Feb-03/10:37 AM
If there's anything this world needs more, it's Batman scat slash. Hell with this love that the others talk about.
Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 18-Feb-03/10:32 AM
Well, I'm amused. Soap-droppingly good.
Re: Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}> 14-Feb-03/9:44 AM
the first was the best.
Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig 21-Feb-03/6:35 AM
mighty good. clever.
Re: Options (Senryu) by bunniesnangels 18-Feb-03/10:44 AM
Delightful.
Re: Amputee by INTRANSIT 13-Feb-03/8:58 PM
very cool. thoroughly cool.
Re: Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels 18-Feb-03/1:54 PM
Nice story, good use of a moral. Solid.
Re: Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage 17-Feb-03/6:30 AM
Pretty damn good.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Feb-03/6:34 AM
sounds like militant angst.


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