| Re: Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Feb-03/8:47 PM |
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if you tried to edit it, you failed miserably.(b),that is the most shab-ass grade school attempt at a comeback I've ever read. worse than the rubber/glue thing. The poeme is bad. face it. last, I will continue to rank how I choose, sir.
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| Re: Amputee by INTRANSIT |
13-Feb-03/8:58 PM |
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very cool. thoroughly cool.
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| Re: For you, I'd make meatloaf by Venus |
13-Feb-03/9:00 PM |
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Clever. The use of food is brilliant. Food symbolism is wondrous.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Feb-03/9:43 AM |
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Yes, as limonade and I are compiling them using the format of the vagina monologues and interviewing assorted penis-bearers. so don't take our feckin' ideas or i'll cutcha.
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| Re: Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
14-Feb-03/9:44 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Feb-03/6:28 AM |
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Lesbians are hardly outside the comprehension of society. They've been a prominent-ish fixture since Sappho and right on until now. No one sees them as outre anymore. They're used as a standard device to seem kinky and hot by the media. All that said, that is really shab lesbian poeme. Did nothin' for me.
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| Re: Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage |
17-Feb-03/6:30 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Feb-03/6:34 AM |
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sounds like militant angst.
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| Re: Forbidden Fruit by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
17-Feb-03/6:38 AM |
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This needs work."Curse my name on public streets" is a good line, however, the one that follows makes me think of obscene phone calls.
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| Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
18-Feb-03/10:32 AM |
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Well, I'm amused. Soap-droppingly good.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Feb-03/10:37 AM |
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If there's anything this world needs more, it's Batman scat slash. Hell with this love that the others talk about.
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| Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
18-Feb-03/10:42 AM |
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Groovin'. Chive-tastic. All I get is the drunk/junkie homeless doing their thing in the graveyard across the street from my place. Maybe I should offer chives?
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| Re: Options (Senryu) by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/10:44 AM |
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| Re: On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/10:46 AM |
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You can eat the kids too. Use the same recipes as for pork, but apparently the palms of the hands are particularly good fried. On the whole, though, you can't go wrong with stir-frying. NEVER eat human brains, though.
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| Re: On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/1:35 PM |
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| Re: Atonement by aperfecttool77 |
18-Feb-03/1:51 PM |
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I'm sorry you were conceived, mr.tool. I speak that utterly sincerely. the world would be just a little sunnier if not only that poeme, but you and everything connected to you didn't exist. BOO! Boo-urns!
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| Re: Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/1:54 PM |
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Nice story, good use of a moral. Solid.
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| Re: Weekend at the Taj by <~> |
19-Feb-03/1:27 PM |
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Fantastic. just fantastic.
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| Re: Eros, and Psycho by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/6:34 AM |
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| Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig |
21-Feb-03/6:35 AM |
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