poemranker ::Forbidden Fruit by thepinkbunnyofdoom

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Forbidden Fruit

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Feb 2003 · Edited 17 Feb 2003 · 2 comments

I am forbidden fruit You can't have me After all its like they say The apple doesn't fall far from the tree Curse my name on public streets Whisper it sweetly in your sleep I'm getting sick of this game Either take the chance Or forget me Can you bury your dignity?

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[4] wOrnella Mutiw 15-Feb-03/7:54 PM Reply
For 40K or for love I can, but for a pink bunny, I can't. Have you ever thought about a mail order bride? Yes.
[n/a] razorgrin 17-Feb-03/6:38 AM Reply
This needs work."Curse my name on public streets" is a good line, however, the one that follows makes me think of obscene phone calls.