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Forbidden Fruit (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom I am forbidden fruit
You can't have me
After all its like they say
The apple doesn't fall far from the tree
Curse my name on public streets
Whisper it sweetly in your sleep
I'm getting sick of this game
Either take the chance
Or forget me
Can you bury your dignity?
Up the ladder:
The Gentleman
Down the ladder:
Heart Made of Glass
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Posted: February 15, 2003 5:15 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2003 7:27 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.746386 Overall Rank: 467 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.19.161
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15-Feb-03/7:54 PM
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For 40K or for love I can, but for a pink bunny, I can't. Have you ever thought about a mail order bride? Yes.
This needs work."Curse my name on public streets" is a good line, however, the one that follows makes me think of obscene phone calls.
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