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Heart Made of Glass (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
I came in here to get away But everywhere I still see your face And when I close my eyes your all that I see Sad as it may sound, you have no clue I've liked for so long but you never knew Now I'm afraid all my doubts are true That just something I can't take It be another stab in my bleeding heart A heart thats been broken a thousand times No matter how much duct tape you have It'd never be enough My heart made of glass would just keep breaking Cause I'd still remember every glance Every moment, evry circumstance Like the piggy back ride up the hill The ride across the 200 acre lake The concert at shackford hall The walk in the park by the waterfall And all those other things Like hanging out in each others rooms Not to mention our strolls down memory lane There wouldn't be enough glue to put it back together again This heart made of glass, This heart made of glass Its so fragile, wasn't meant to last So I think I'll take a chance once and for all If I'm wrong throw it against the wall And watch it shatter into a million pieces I came in here to get away But everywhere I can still see your face When I close my eyes your all that I see Sad as it may sound, you have no clue I liked you for so long but you never knew

Up the ladder: Forbidden Fruit

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8333335
Weighted score: 6.746386
Overall Rank: 468
Posted: March 10, 2003 1:56 PM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2003 1:56 PM PST
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[5] TanHand @ 68.14.26.239 | 10-Mar-03/4:32 PM | Reply
Here's my version!! I hope you like it!!

Once I had a love and it was a gas
Soon turned out had a heart of glass
Seemed like the real thing, only to find
Mucho mistrust, love's gone behind
Once I had a love and it was divine
Soon found out I was losing my mind
It seemed like the real thing but I was so blind
Mucho mistrust, love's gone behind

In between
What I find is pleasing and I'm feeling fine
Love is so confusing there's no peace of mind
If I fear I'm losing you it's just no good
You teasing like you do
[0] lunar @ 195.92.67.76 | 23-Mar-03/3:34 AM | Reply
well i like this poem - bit cliched (cant spell) but thats poetry for you - its nice to read someones poetry who seems to have the same problems as me but worse! ;o)
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