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Forbidden Fruit (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

I am forbidden fruit You can't have me After all its like they say The apple doesn't fall far from the tree Curse my name on public streets Whisper it sweetly in your sleep I'm getting sick of this game Either take the chance Or forget me Can you bury your dignity?

razorgrin 17-Feb-03/6:38 AM
This needs work."Curse my name on public streets" is a good line, however, the one that follows makes me think of obscene phone calls.




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