Re: a comment on rainday by Bill Z Bub	16-Jul-03/9:39 AM
Stranger than "cloudbells" or "galoshed"? :)
Re: a comment on unsent by Bill Z Bub	15-Jul-03/5:44 PM
Hmm. Hoom. Hum. "will slowly/ yield/again."? "can slowly/ yield/ again" "must slowly/ yield/ again" "yields/ again" ? AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAa. Rewriting and rewriting and reswdfitlnvinldv...... ...I need a glass of water.
Re: a comment on thought & memory by Bill Z Bub	15-Jul-03/5:40 PM
Thank you. How about "unseen"?
Re: Acoustic by zzinnia66	15-Jul-03/5:38 PM
OH, "wInd"! Not "wind". Now it makes sense!
Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub	15-Jul-03/5:18 PM
Who is tint?
Re: a comment on unsent by Bill Z Bub	13-Jul-03/8:34 PM
Well, I know it isn't, now. And thanks.
Re: a comment on The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend	13-Jul-03/8:29 PM
I want to assure you I meant that in a completely humble, non-arrogant way. Take every comment I make with a grain of salt, because I am highly uneducated. My post-secondary education consisted of Art school. As for the English language and grammar, and literature and poetic devices and meter and such, I am mostly self taught. Oops, I just blew my cover! The gig is up! You'll never take me alive, copper! Nyaaah!
Re: The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend	13-Jul-03/6:09 PM
The only critique I have for your writing is the dearth of concrete imagery. Something to bite into, the juice streaming out in molten arcs.
Re: A Brand New Eye by EAger to Offend	13-Jul-03/5:53 PM
slightly abstract, but the poets will get it
Re: Optimism, pessimism and my quarter theory by INTRANSIT	13-Jul-03/5:30 PM
This one's worth a quarter for certain. And I'm a cheap bastard. What the hell, here's a ten.
Re: a comment on The obsessive compulsive sloth was a junkie by <{Baba^Yaga}>	8-Jul-03/10:37 PM
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Re: a comment on the photobooth by Bill Z Bub	5-Jul-03/6:55 PM
Okay... NFG BOUGHT IT! SNAP! (hm, slathered names...) I lave the world in slathered leather feathers.
Re: a comment on the photobooth by Bill Z Bub	5-Jul-03/6:42 PM
it got et?
Re: a comment on I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	5-Jul-03/5:58 PM
Great stuff, man. That's about the extent of my music criticism abilities. I played bass guitar in a band in high school. The band had one gig, then broke up. They all wanted to play crappy cover tunes. Thanks for the movie recommendations. Doubt my local video store carries them, but ya never know. So, hows "sharkmouth" coming? Heh.
Re: a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub	5-Jul-03/5:51 AM
Thanks for the critique. I've revised this piece several times since this draft, but since it's in the top twenty, I don't want to wipe out all the votes. ~William Zanzibar Bubbington, Jr.
Re: Untitled #13 by david	4-Jul-03/7:21 PM
the story of an altarboy who wore white too long. Then one day he got gangrene and his toes rotted off, each little piggy one by one falling and collected in a basket that he keeps in the back of a cupboard. Just don't let the earwigs in. They have a knack for pinching what little memory is left. Hmm, I see you've been around a while. But I don't think I've read any poems of yours before today. Oh here's a Ten --> 10.
Re: I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	4-Jul-03/7:13 PM
I saw an amazing movie last night.: "Frida". Ah, Salma baby, I don't know wether to salute or cry. Or both. Hey do you ever stop writing? Didn't think so. Is okay if I tape this to my bathroom mirror and repeat it to myself every morning?
Re: touch of the grass by david	4-Jul-03/7:08 PM
Green teeth. Exquisite. I raise my coffee cup to you, sir. Salut! This is what happens when I'm away from this site for a month.
Re: Death on my arm by INTRANSIT	4-Jul-03/7:03 PM
nice minimalist piece ** I've been away far too long ** and anarchy has descended on rancid mustard wings ** also, I'm getting published ** hooray, I am semi-semi-professional **
Re: a comment on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub	9-Jun-03/11:32 AM
That'd be awesome.