| Re: Gloria's stairwell circles up & down by Bachus |
8-Jun-03/9:14 PM |
he looked at the tops of his shoes
and realized he was out
of his element
really
but what the hell
these bastards are
mad brilliant beautiful
mayhaps they'll rub off
on me.
get it?
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| Re: a comment on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
7-Jun-03/8:01 PM |
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You've convinced me that I'm you. But I don't believe that "you" exist. Therefore "I" do not exist. There is only darkshark. Darkshark the Devouring Devilgod at the center of the universe. And the Elder Gods play their sickening bagged-pipes...
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| Re: a comment on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
6-Jun-03/8:32 PM |
When I was ten years old, or so, I had an extra tooth grow
in behind one of my front teeth. I don't remember exactly how
they fixed it, but I had braces for quite a while,
and even now I wear a jagged smile.
Inside my cheek, there are scars still,
from the metal wires that were careless cut,
where only I can find them, and taste the stainless steel
with the bitter blade of my tongue.
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| Re: a comment on Abortion by horus8 |
6-Jun-03/8:00 PM |
AHA! I have you now, "Professor" Soderstrom! One cannot BUY toast, one must MAKE it! Thus I deduce that under the silken veil we shall find-
GOOD LORD! I am faint
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| Re: Bad habits & tramps by horus8 |
6-Jun-03/7:27 PM |
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Woe! All is lost! The Wicked One hath been Un-Harnessed!
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| Re: Stopped by zzinnia66 |
6-Jun-03/5:14 PM |
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mind if i slide into this clique and dish up a scoopful of panegyrics?
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| Re: Bad habits & tramps by horus8 |
6-Jun-03/5:00 PM |
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ya, I can see it. I can smell it. I can dig it.
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| Re: A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm |
6-Jun-03/4:51 PM |
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Col. Mustard in the Bedroom with the Wank Harness.
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| Re: Watching Time Slip Away by kassanna |
6-Jun-03/4:48 PM |
too
many
spaces
can't
read
properly
must
stop
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| Re: Triolet, for Jason by beakism |
6-Jun-03/4:42 PM |
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| Re: Break Down by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Jun-03/4:31 PM |
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| Re: The Truth of Death by Schizophrenic |
6-Jun-03/3:39 PM |
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| Re: Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
5-Jun-03/6:26 PM |
The second-last line: "Since your love will never keep warm."
Should there be a word in between keep and warm? Such as "me" or "you"?
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| Re: a comment on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jun-03/5:55 PM |
Yeaaah, now if I can just convince Horus8 to record it...
As for the splaining, I'll remove it eventually.
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| Re: a comment on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jun-03/5:52 PM |
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But thats because you are an god of drunkeness and poetry.
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| Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
5-Jun-03/11:11 AM |
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I don't know why, but I don't care for this one much. Just the way things are sometimes.
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| Re: Carpet threading the sky by INTRANSIT |
5-Jun-03/11:08 AM |
First half excellent. Second half confusing. Then again, I'm the idiot that wrote "soothing blisters of synthesis
walk on alkaline locks", so I have no right to say such things! I must be punished.
The title is a ten. I give the body seven. That averages out to 8.5!
Rock on.
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| Re: suppose (a warm sun) by richa |
5-Jun-03/10:49 AM |
Wonderful, spare,
lilting, tilting,
abrubt and
nine,
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| Re: a comment on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jun-03/10:41 AM |
Thank you oh lord of the sun-wine realm, oh avatar of a new aeon, oh stalker, oh warrior, oh sorcerer.
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| Re: a comment on Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus |
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