| Re: There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8 |
31-May-03/7:07 PM |
My sister-in-law is narcoleptic.
You sunuvagun. 10
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3-Jun-03/8:34 PM |
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Yesssssss, its all about the roughage.
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| Re: Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Jun-03/3:20 PM |
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Fuck. Ten. Fuck! Son of a Fucking Goddamn Bitchprick! FUCKING TEN. I cry bullseye.
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| Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/4:44 PM |
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a breath of fresh air. No wait, it smells like FUCKING in here you perverted little weasel! 9.9
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| Re: suppose (a warm sun) by richa |
5-Jun-03/10:49 AM |
Wonderful, spare,
lilting, tilting,
abrubt and
nine,
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| Re: Carpet threading the sky by INTRANSIT |
5-Jun-03/11:08 AM |
First half excellent. Second half confusing. Then again, I'm the idiot that wrote "soothing blisters of synthesis
walk on alkaline locks", so I have no right to say such things! I must be punished.
The title is a ten. I give the body seven. That averages out to 8.5!
Rock on.
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| Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
5-Jun-03/11:11 AM |
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I don't know why, but I don't care for this one much. Just the way things are sometimes.
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| Re: Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
5-Jun-03/6:26 PM |
The second-last line: "Since your love will never keep warm."
Should there be a word in between keep and warm? Such as "me" or "you"?
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| Re: The Truth of Death by Schizophrenic |
6-Jun-03/3:39 PM |
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| Re: Break Down by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Jun-03/4:31 PM |
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6-Jun-03/4:34 PM |
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mmmmmmm, good luck broth with a side of placenta.
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| Re: Triolet, for Jason by beakism |
6-Jun-03/4:42 PM |
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| Re: Watching Time Slip Away by kassanna |
6-Jun-03/4:48 PM |
too
many
spaces
can't
read
properly
must
stop
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| Re: A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm |
6-Jun-03/4:51 PM |
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Col. Mustard in the Bedroom with the Wank Harness.
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| Re: Bad habits & tramps by horus8 |
6-Jun-03/5:00 PM |
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ya, I can see it. I can smell it. I can dig it.
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6-Jun-03/5:10 PM |
I missed this one the first time around. Vintage god'swife.
What I would do for a picture of you.
MWMWMWMWMWMWMWMWMWMWMWMW
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| Re: Stopped by zzinnia66 |
6-Jun-03/5:14 PM |
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mind if i slide into this clique and dish up a scoopful of panegyrics?
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| Re: Bad habits & tramps by horus8 |
6-Jun-03/7:27 PM |
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Woe! All is lost! The Wicked One hath been Un-Harnessed!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Jun-03/12:27 PM |
Those first two lines are PURE GOLD BABY!
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| Re: Gloria's stairwell circles up & down by Bachus |
8-Jun-03/9:14 PM |
he looked at the tops of his shoes
and realized he was out
of his element
really
but what the hell
these bastards are
mad brilliant beautiful
mayhaps they'll rub off
on me.
get it?
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