regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/7:06 AM
Okay, now THIS is great stuff! Ten.
Re: Landmine by Bachus	20-Jul-03/9:58 PM
yeah then you'd need an artificial head
Re: Acoustic by zzinnia66	15-Jul-03/5:38 PM
OH, "wInd"! Not "wind". Now it makes sense!
Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8	22-Jul-03/11:05 PM
That's damn funny.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/7:02 AM
"Are we there yet?"
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-03/10:53 PM
mercy, have mercy, good woman It's all too much too much for me to breathe and feast. My belly's fit to burst with the volume of this verse. The troubadours and bearers of the quill stand helpless before your beauty, bursting from within your center, taking your fill of the Lord's of the realm. My hand sieves the dirt and the swill seeking for the silver coin that fell on the day I pried the iron nail from my wrist, and fell from the skull, down into the mist. God took a bride one day quarter past infinity The morningstar led the choral host and Chronos stood to make a toast I need to show my love to someone before it goes to gray I would crucify myself for you on a bed of hay Some women are so easy to love. And some men live like statuary without the adornment of a dove, and now these lines are getting scary. Goodnight
Re: Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik	24-Jul-03/7:03 PM
Yeah, wipe that smarmy grin off his J-Lo Ass munching face. Ten.
Re: Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer	18-Jul-03/10:59 AM
Whammo. Golden Calf Award!
Re: Border towns & the runs by horus8	16-Jul-03/8:37 PM
excellente. ... but your use of words such as... the "n word" and others disturbs me greatly. I'm just a repressed politically correct canuck I guess. :\
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Jul-03/10:04 AM
Chilled to perfection, like a jello shot. ? Somehow I have yet to vote on this, so I'm gonna bump it up, and bring down my own poem which is currently at #1. Wait, let me enjoy this for a moment longer. I'm swinging straight up at the top, up where the air is fresh and clean ....yeah. Okay here goes.
Re: The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend	13-Jul-03/6:09 PM
The only critique I have for your writing is the dearth of concrete imagery. Something to bite into, the juice streaming out in molten arcs.
Re: Optimism, pessimism and my quarter theory by INTRANSIT	13-Jul-03/5:30 PM
This one's worth a quarter for certain. And I'm a cheap bastard. What the hell, here's a ten.
Re: A Brand New Eye by EAger to Offend	13-Jul-03/5:53 PM
slightly abstract, but the poets will get it
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/10:13 PM
xoxoxoxox
Re: Untitled #13 by david	4-Jul-03/7:21 PM
the story of an altarboy who wore white too long. Then one day he got gangrene and his toes rotted off, each little piggy one by one falling and collected in a basket that he keeps in the back of a cupboard. Just don't let the earwigs in. They have a knack for pinching what little memory is left. Hmm, I see you've been around a while. But I don't think I've read any poems of yours before today. Oh here's a Ten --> 10.
Re: touch of the grass by david	4-Jul-03/7:08 PM
Green teeth. Exquisite. I raise my coffee cup to you, sir. Salut! This is what happens when I'm away from this site for a month.
Re: Death on my arm by INTRANSIT	4-Jul-03/7:03 PM
nice minimalist piece ** I've been away far too long ** and anarchy has descended on rancid mustard wings ** also, I'm getting published ** hooray, I am semi-semi-professional **
Re: I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	4-Jul-03/7:13 PM
I saw an amazing movie last night.: "Frida". Ah, Salma baby, I don't know wether to salute or cry. Or both. Hey do you ever stop writing? Didn't think so. Is okay if I tape this to my bathroom mirror and repeat it to myself every morning?
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-03/9:16 PM
~sigh~ Here's a numerical symbol of my frustrated desire. That's all.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/10:08 PM
Top 5 poets? The lad's got sand. And who would the remainder be, out of curiousity?