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| Re: The Film Epic That Is Blacula by razorgrin |
21-May-03/10:05 AM |
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Leonard Maltin is a dork.
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21-May-03/10:14 AM |
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good shot, kid. don't get cocky.
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21-May-03/10:17 AM |
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The judland wastes are not to be traveled lightly.
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21-May-03/10:18 AM |
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Size matters not. Look at me. Judge me by my size, do you?
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| Re: I'm reserved by Alyssa91 |
21-May-03/10:19 AM |
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You must unlearn what you have learned.
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| Re: Milkshake until beef jerky by horus8 |
21-May-03/10:26 AM |
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(Ahem) Thats nothing compared to the big Crazy Squirrel Syndrome scare we had last year...
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| Re: Activating your Infinity by horus8 |
21-May-03/10:36 AM |
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Luminous beings are we...not this crude matter.
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21-May-03/10:38 AM |
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I can't get involved. I've got work to do.
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22-May-03/4:12 PM |
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No quote this time. Just a ten.
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| Re: Immortal Coil by Exiled_humanity |
23-May-03/12:37 AM |
I believe it should be:
*flesh's* fee
*Torn* flesh heals
*life's* dirt
That is all. Go on about your business.
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| Re: My girl by simone_girard |
23-May-03/12:49 AM |
Sorry, but this is just bad. Insipid and cliche. And it should be "you're precious", not "your precious", unless you're Gollum.
Where is it being published? Christian Women's Daily Affirmations Newsletter? Also, if you're talking about God, you should capitalize Lord.
(I learned SOMEthing in Sunday school)
The Lord above knows that I try not to be mean to the innocent, but this is the wrong "sight" for this kind of simple righteous Christian Inspirational greeting card stuff.
Unless you like to throw bloody meat to the wolves.
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| Re: time weights by brazen |
23-May-03/12:57 AM |
Very cerebral. But also vague and unclear to me.
For example:
"a passing
between the deeds undone
and the tasks left at hand"
Aren't the deeds undone also the deeds left to do, or in other words the tasks left at hand? They seem to be the exact same thing.
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| Re: Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik |
23-May-03/10:08 AM |
The question before you is, do you rate the poem high or low? Zero or Ten? The thing of it is, though: the choice has already been made for you. You just have to understand WHY you will make that choice.
In conclusion, Monica Belucci has nice cleavage and I TOOK THE PURPLE PILL!
Sincerely,
Mr. Anderson
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| Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom |
23-May-03/6:57 PM |
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Aren't you a little short for a stormtrooper?
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| Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom |
23-May-03/6:57 PM |
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For spamming I give you a zero. And I didn't read your poem either.
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| Re: Dimestore Angel by Deborah Carter |
24-May-03/8:00 PM |
Bill Murray?!
I loved him in "Groundhog Day"!
This lyric reminds me of something that might be sung by Sheryl Crow or Joan Osborne or somebody.
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| Re: The Best This Dream Can Offer by Deborah Carter |
24-May-03/8:03 PM |
Welcome to Poemranker. I am your host, William Zanzibar Bubbington III.
"Boss, boss, ze prawne! Ze prawne!"
Okay, I'm not really your host. I'm just a bored regular. Are you a singer/songwriter?
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24-May-03/8:11 PM |
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an "instructor" of psychology? hmm.
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| Re: Scarlet Letter by brokenheart |
24-May-03/8:24 PM |
Wecome,
to Poemranker Island!
*sets up chair, sits down to wait for -=Dark_Angel=-
"Ze prawne, boss!"
"SHUT UP!"
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