on Scarlet Letter by brokenheart
24 May 2003, 8:24 PM
Wecome,
to Poemranker Island!
*sets up chair, sits down to wait for -=Dark_Angel=-
"Ze prawne, boss!"
"SHUT UP!"
to Poemranker Island!
*sets up chair, sits down to wait for -=Dark_Angel=-
"Ze prawne, boss!"
"SHUT UP!"
on Dimestore Angel by Deborah Carter
24 May 2003, 8:00 PM
Bill Murray?!
I loved him in "Groundhog Day"!
This lyric reminds me of something that might be sung by Sheryl Crow or Joan Osborne or somebody.
I loved him in "Groundhog Day"!
This lyric reminds me of something that might be sung by Sheryl Crow or Joan Osborne or somebody.
on Theology by dougsoderstrom
23 May 2003, 6:57 PM
Aren't you a little short for a stormtrooper?
on Theology by dougsoderstrom
23 May 2003, 6:57 PM
For spamming I give you a zero. And I didn't read your poem either.
on Immortal Coil by Exiled_humanity
23 May 2003, 12:37 AM
I believe it should be:
*flesh's* fee
*Torn* flesh heals
*life's* dirt
That is all. Go on about your business.
*flesh's* fee
*Torn* flesh heals
*life's* dirt
That is all. Go on about your business.
on I'm reserved by Alyssa91
21 May 2003, 10:19 AM
You must unlearn what you have learned.
on My girl by simone_girard
23 May 2003, 12:49 AM
Sorry, but this is just bad. Insipid and cliche. And it should be "you're precious", not "your precious", unless you're Gollum.
Where is it being published? Christian Women's Daily Affirmations Newsletter? Also, if you're talking about God, you should capitalize Lord.
(I learned SOMEthing in Sunday school)
The Lord above knows that I try not to be mean to the innocent, but this is the wrong "sight" for this kind of simple righteous Christian Inspirational greeting card stuff.
Unless you like to throw bloody meat to the wolves.
Where is it being published? Christian Women's Daily Affirmations Newsletter? Also, if you're talking about God, you should capitalize Lord.
(I learned SOMEthing in Sunday school)
The Lord above knows that I try not to be mean to the innocent, but this is the wrong "sight" for this kind of simple righteous Christian Inspirational greeting card stuff.
Unless you like to throw bloody meat to the wolves.
on time weights by brazen
23 May 2003, 12:57 AM
Very cerebral. But also vague and unclear to me.
For example:
"a passing
between the deeds undone
and the tasks left at hand"
Aren't the deeds undone also the deeds left to do, or in other words the tasks left at hand? They seem to be the exact same thing.
For example:
"a passing
between the deeds undone
and the tasks left at hand"
Aren't the deeds undone also the deeds left to do, or in other words the tasks left at hand? They seem to be the exact same thing.
on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik
23 May 2003, 10:08 AM
The question before you is, do you rate the poem high or low? Zero or Ten? The thing of it is, though: the choice has already been made for you. You just have to understand WHY you will make that choice.
In conclusion, Monica Belucci has nice cleavage and I TOOK THE PURPLE PILL!
Sincerely,
Mr. Anderson
In conclusion, Monica Belucci has nice cleavage and I TOOK THE PURPLE PILL!
Sincerely,
Mr. Anderson
on Milkshake until beef jerky by horus8
21 May 2003, 10:26 AM
(Ahem) Thats nothing compared to the big Crazy Squirrel Syndrome scare we had last year...
on Activating your Infinity by horus8
21 May 2003, 10:36 AM
Luminous beings are we...not this crude matter.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:38 AM
I can't get involved. I've got work to do.
on The Film Epic That Is Blacula by razorgrin
21 May 2003, 10:05 AM
Leonard Maltin is a dork.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:14 AM
good shot, kid. don't get cocky.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:17 AM
The judland wastes are not to be traveled lightly.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:18 AM
Size matters not. Look at me. Judge me by my size, do you?
on some deleted poem
22 May 2003, 4:12 PM
No quote this time. Just a ten.
on some deleted poem
24 May 2003, 8:11 PM
an "instructor" of psychology? hmm.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:03 AM
"phuqkin"?? Really? :-/
"Boss, boss, ze prawne! Ze prawne!"
Okay, I'm not really your host. I'm just a bored regular. Are you a singer/songwriter?