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Scarlet Letter (Other) by brokenheart
Standing in the altar
when the sun is about to rise,
Waiting for my love to come
so she can be my bride.
I have waited for so long
for this dream to come true
with the ring in my hand
and the words "I do".
At about noon, she arrived
with a letter in her hand,
With a sad look on her face she said
"I hope you understand".
As I read the letter
tears flowed down my eyes,
I broke down when I saw
her final words "good bye".
I couldn't believe the she found someone
who was better than me,
I thought that she was the one for me
I thought that we were ment to be.
I rushed out of the altar
carring only a broken heart,
the others were wondering
"Why did I depart".
Everyone ran outside
to see me zoom away,
They knew that I was in trouble
and that begins the chase.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.125
Weighted score: 4.4957347
Overall Rank: 12831
Posted: May 24, 2003 8:18 PM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2003 8:18 PM PDT
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to Poemranker Island!
*sets up chair, sits down to wait for -=Dark_Angel=-
"Ze prawne, boss!"
"SHUT UP!"