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Scarlet Letter (Other) by brokenheart

Standing in the altar when the sun is about to rise, Waiting for my love to come so she can be my bride. I have waited for so long for this dream to come true with the ring in my hand and the words "I do". At about noon, she arrived with a letter in her hand, With a sad look on her face she said "I hope you understand". As I read the letter tears flowed down my eyes, I broke down when I saw her final words "good bye". I couldn't believe the she found someone who was better than me, I thought that she was the one for me I thought that we were ment to be. I rushed out of the altar carring only a broken heart, the others were wondering "Why did I depart". Everyone ran outside to see me zoom away, They knew that I was in trouble and that begins the chase.

Bill Z Bub 24-May-03/8:24 PM
Wecome,
to Poemranker Island!
*sets up chair, sits down to wait for -=Dark_Angel=-

"Ze prawne, boss!"
"SHUT UP!"




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