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20 most recent comments by Caducus (821-840) and replies

Re: Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29 15-Nov-02/8:57 AM
I'm trying to learn Haiku, I've written a few but at least I've learned from you how to swear nonchalantly.
Re: Your Guiding Light by Bonehiss 15-Nov-02/8:50 AM
7, the last few lines, but it left me a bit cold
Re: we by joey 15-Nov-02/8:37 AM
Oh God I'm drowning in carrots
Re: give by joey 15-Nov-02/8:36 AM
This was as wet as a nun watching
Lesbian Swedish mud wrestlers.

Joey come on man you can do better
Re: Dynamic Duo by INTRANSIT 15-Nov-02/8:31 AM
Roll up a rizzla, watch some daytime TV, throw some darts off a tall building then run like s**t, take a chill pill daffodil,

time to relax from being INTRANSIT.

Liked your spikytonguedpoem
Re: The Real You by jonny2000 15-Nov-02/3:50 AM
Liked the whole turtle thing.

Horus is right your user name sucks like A scene from the Oval office, change it to something like funkyspunkydwarfmonkey.

i'm high
Re: School. by cleverdevice 15-Nov-02/3:38 AM
God forgive me for laughing when they violated you in the hinges, very poignant, original slant on bullying, liked the style of it, self pity with style, and i'm thinking of the time i glued a paper penis on neil bentleys head.

i'm giving this a 9, you missed one for not killing the bastards , kill kill kill !
Re: Stars Of The Sky by GTK 15-Nov-02/1:38 AM
too sugary, post an angry poem
Re: You wouldn't Accept by GTK 15-Nov-02/1:36 AM
Such a horible experience needs more beautiful words, baptize yourself in your emotion more, liked it enough - 6
Re: The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss 15-Nov-02/1:20 AM
Was just getting into it, and it ended prematurely, needs more ooomphh
Re: a comment on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus 15-Nov-02/1:17 AM
let me know when you've written for your ma, I'd wanna read it.

Pleased I pleased -thanks
Re: a comment on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus 15-Nov-02/1:16 AM
Ok Bachus, the armchair is yours, I'll even throw in the Doritos and series 4 of baywatch.

and thanks for your cmnts
Re: ... by logun2002ya 14-Nov-02/8:03 AM
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A true mindfucker of a poem, i want to read it again after reflection and maybe re-vote, watch this space i may have questions.

wheres the paracetomol
Re: untitled by purplestain 14-Nov-02/7:59 AM
Not bad my philosophical stain
Re: Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit 14-Nov-02/6:57 AM
Women say the average man takes only 2 minutes for sex, you only take 87 seconds to write this,, Why dont you give all us guys something to read when shagging !

Your new jobs sorted ! 9/10
Re: me by spazzman15 13-Nov-02/9:32 AM
7/10 Bollocks ! what the hell do people expect Shakespeare@we'reallfuckingbetter.com to submit poems?

This is so close to a 10 Bo Dereks nipples are shitting themselves.

Hey spazzman this is a daisy, well done man
Re: Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird 13-Nov-02/9:17 AM
I feel guily for laughing at the last line, I like the angle your coming from, I'll email it to tony 'poodle' blair
Re: Obstacle In Between by confuzdlilgirl 13-Nov-02/6:47 AM
COOL
Re: Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe 13-Nov-02/6:10 AM
forgot to vote 7/10
Re: Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe 13-Nov-02/6:09 AM
Hi newbieme, first of all I thought your poem was very moving, its a bit freaky as i too wrote a poem called 'Goodbye Dad' and when i post it next week i want you to read it because the scene you set is similar to mine. I imagine that could be read at a funeral and dont forget mate, poetry is not always about critical consensus most people would be moved by your poem and that makes it a force, you know this aint W.H Audens 'Funeral' but its your Auden and i respect that, if it was any Dad they would be proud.


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