Re: Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29 |
15-Nov-02/8:57 AM |
I'm trying to learn Haiku, I've written a few but at least I've learned from you how to swear nonchalantly.
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Re: Your Guiding Light by Bonehiss |
15-Nov-02/8:50 AM |
7, the last few lines, but it left me a bit cold
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Re: we by joey |
15-Nov-02/8:37 AM |
Oh God I'm drowning in carrots
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Re: give by joey |
15-Nov-02/8:36 AM |
This was as wet as a nun watching
Lesbian Swedish mud wrestlers.
Joey come on man you can do better
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Re: Dynamic Duo by INTRANSIT |
15-Nov-02/8:31 AM |
Roll up a rizzla, watch some daytime TV, throw some darts off a tall building then run like s**t, take a chill pill daffodil,
time to relax from being INTRANSIT.
Liked your spikytonguedpoem
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Re: The Real You by jonny2000 |
15-Nov-02/3:50 AM |
Liked the whole turtle thing.
Horus is right your user name sucks like A scene from the Oval office, change it to something like funkyspunkydwarfmonkey.
i'm high
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Re: School. by cleverdevice |
15-Nov-02/3:38 AM |
God forgive me for laughing when they violated you in the hinges, very poignant, original slant on bullying, liked the style of it, self pity with style, and i'm thinking of the time i glued a paper penis on neil bentleys head.
i'm giving this a 9, you missed one for not killing the bastards , kill kill kill !
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Re: Stars Of The Sky by GTK |
15-Nov-02/1:38 AM |
too sugary, post an angry poem
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Re: You wouldn't Accept by GTK |
15-Nov-02/1:36 AM |
Such a horible experience needs more beautiful words, baptize yourself in your emotion more, liked it enough - 6
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Re: The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss |
15-Nov-02/1:20 AM |
Was just getting into it, and it ended prematurely, needs more ooomphh
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Re: a comment on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus |
15-Nov-02/1:17 AM |
let me know when you've written for your ma, I'd wanna read it.
Pleased I pleased -thanks
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Re: a comment on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus |
15-Nov-02/1:16 AM |
Ok Bachus, the armchair is yours, I'll even throw in the Doritos and series 4 of baywatch.
and thanks for your cmnts
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Re: ... by logun2002ya |
14-Nov-02/8:03 AM |
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A true mindfucker of a poem, i want to read it again after reflection and maybe re-vote, watch this space i may have questions.
wheres the paracetomol
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Re: untitled by purplestain |
14-Nov-02/7:59 AM |
Not bad my philosophical stain
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Re: Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit |
14-Nov-02/6:57 AM |
Women say the average man takes only 2 minutes for sex, you only take 87 seconds to write this,, Why dont you give all us guys something to read when shagging !
Your new jobs sorted ! 9/10
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Re: me by spazzman15 |
13-Nov-02/9:32 AM |
7/10 Bollocks ! what the hell do people expect Shakespeare@we'reallfuckingbetter.com to submit poems?
This is so close to a 10 Bo Dereks nipples are shitting themselves.
Hey spazzman this is a daisy, well done man
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Re: Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird |
13-Nov-02/9:17 AM |
I feel guily for laughing at the last line, I like the angle your coming from, I'll email it to tony 'poodle' blair
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Re: Obstacle In Between by confuzdlilgirl |
13-Nov-02/6:47 AM |
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Re: Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe |
13-Nov-02/6:10 AM |
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Re: Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe |
13-Nov-02/6:09 AM |
Hi newbieme, first of all I thought your poem was very moving, its a bit freaky as i too wrote a poem called 'Goodbye Dad' and when i post it next week i want you to read it because the scene you set is similar to mine. I imagine that could be read at a funeral and dont forget mate, poetry is not always about critical consensus most people would be moved by your poem and that makes it a force, you know this aint W.H Audens 'Funeral' but its your Auden and i respect that, if it was any Dad they would be proud.
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