on Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29
15 Nov 2002, 8:57 AM
I'm trying to learn Haiku, I've written a few but at least I've learned from you how to swear nonchalantly.
on Your Guiding Light by Bonehiss
15 Nov 2002, 8:50 AM
7, the last few lines, but it left me a bit cold
on Dynamic Duo by INTRANSIT
15 Nov 2002, 8:31 AM
Roll up a rizzla, watch some daytime TV, throw some darts off a tall building then run like s**t, take a chill pill daffodil,
time to relax from being INTRANSIT.
Liked your spikytonguedpoem
time to relax from being INTRANSIT.
Liked your spikytonguedpoem
on The Real You by jonny2000
15 Nov 2002, 3:50 AM
Liked the whole turtle thing.
Horus is right your user name sucks like A scene from the Oval office, change it to something like funkyspunkydwarfmonkey.
i'm high
Horus is right your user name sucks like A scene from the Oval office, change it to something like funkyspunkydwarfmonkey.
i'm high
on School. by cleverdevice
15 Nov 2002, 3:38 AM
God forgive me for laughing when they violated you in the hinges, very poignant, original slant on bullying, liked the style of it, self pity with style, and i'm thinking of the time i glued a paper penis on neil bentleys head.
i'm giving this a 9, you missed one for not killing the bastards , kill kill kill !
i'm giving this a 9, you missed one for not killing the bastards , kill kill kill !
on Stars Of The Sky by GTK
15 Nov 2002, 1:38 AM
too sugary, post an angry poem
on You wouldn't Accept by GTK
15 Nov 2002, 1:36 AM
Such a horible experience needs more beautiful words, baptize yourself in your emotion more, liked it enough - 6
on The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss
15 Nov 2002, 1:20 AM
Was just getting into it, and it ended prematurely, needs more ooomphh
replying on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus
15 Nov 2002, 1:17 AM
let me know when you've written for your ma, I'd wanna read it.
Pleased I pleased -thanks
Pleased I pleased -thanks
replying on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus
15 Nov 2002, 1:16 AM
Ok Bachus, the armchair is yours, I'll even throw in the Doritos and series 4 of baywatch.
and thanks for your cmnts
and thanks for your cmnts
on ... by logun2002ya
14 Nov 2002, 8:03 AM
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A true mindfucker of a poem, i want to read it again after reflection and maybe re-vote, watch this space i may have questions.
wheres the paracetomol
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A true mindfucker of a poem, i want to read it again after reflection and maybe re-vote, watch this space i may have questions.
wheres the paracetomol
on untitled by purplestain
14 Nov 2002, 7:59 AM
Not bad my philosophical stain
on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit
14 Nov 2002, 6:57 AM
Women say the average man takes only 2 minutes for sex, you only take 87 seconds to write this,, Why dont you give all us guys something to read when shagging !
Your new jobs sorted ! 9/10
Your new jobs sorted ! 9/10
on me by spazzman15
13 Nov 2002, 9:32 AM
7/10 Bollocks ! what the hell do people expect Shakespeare@we'reallfuckingbetter.com to submit poems?
This is so close to a 10 Bo Dereks nipples are shitting themselves.
Hey spazzman this is a daisy, well done man
This is so close to a 10 Bo Dereks nipples are shitting themselves.
Hey spazzman this is a daisy, well done man
on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird
13 Nov 2002, 9:17 AM
I feel guily for laughing at the last line, I like the angle your coming from, I'll email it to tony 'poodle' blair
on Obstacle In Between by confuzdlilgirl
13 Nov 2002, 6:47 AM
COOL
on Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe
13 Nov 2002, 6:10 AM
forgot to vote 7/10
on Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe
13 Nov 2002, 6:09 AM
Hi newbieme, first of all I thought your poem was very moving, its a bit freaky as i too wrote a poem called 'Goodbye Dad' and when i post it next week i want you to read it because the scene you set is similar to mine. I imagine that could be read at a funeral and dont forget mate, poetry is not always about critical consensus most people would be moved by your poem and that makes it a force, you know this aint W.H Audens 'Funeral' but its your Auden and i respect that, if it was any Dad they would be proud.