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The Real You

by jonny2000

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Nov 2002 · Edited 13 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

Always new, Always cool, He think he rule, wearing shiny shoes, wearing baggy blues, flip, flopping, sliding up and down the avenues, Looking tough, wearing rough, big and buff, He got all the stuff, Or does he? you see, I see what no others see, I see past the buff the walking tough, the wearing rough, Others see the shell of the turtle walking proudly downward the street, I see the inside, the nice, the soft, and the heart, I see the real you. by jonny2000

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[7] god'swife 13-Nov-02/2:16 PM Reply

So your 12. Fantastic your poem needs a little help, but I can't imagine my son writing anything close so I'll give you 4 for the poem and 3 for having the courage to write poetry. Post some more. The second line seems to have a typo, or did you mean to leave the 's' off of think and he? Try writing this without having to rhyme. I'm curious to see what that looks like.

[7] horus8 13-Nov-02/4:55 PM Reply

cute. lose the bottom johnie 1234567891011
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[n/a] poetandknowit › horus8 13-Nov-02/5:11 PM Reply

Fucking' hours. Get your kid off the keybored.

[8] Caducus 15-Nov-02/3:50 AM Reply

Liked the whole turtle thing.

Horus is right your user name sucks like A scene from the Oval office, change it to something like funkyspunkydwarfmonkey.

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