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The Real You (Free verse) by jonny2000

Always new, Always cool, He think he rule, wearing shiny shoes, wearing baggy blues, flip, flopping, sliding up and down the avenues, Looking tough, wearing rough, big and buff, He got all the stuff, Or does he? you see, I see what no others see, I see past the buff the walking tough, the wearing rough, Others see the shell of the turtle walking proudly downward the street, I see the inside, the nice, the soft, and the heart, I see the real you. by jonny2000

Caducus 15-Nov-02/3:50 AM
Liked the whole turtle thing.

Horus is right your user name sucks like A scene from the Oval office, change it to something like funkyspunkydwarfmonkey.

i'm high




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