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You wouldn't Accept (Free verse) by GTK I gave you a chance,
you couldn't accept it.
I gave you my mind,
you didn't accept me.
I gave you a gift,
you didn't accept it.
I gave you my heart,
you didn't accept me.
I gave you a rose,
you couldn't accept it.
I gave you the truth,
you didn't accept me.
I gave you a kiss,
you didn't accept it.
I gave you my passion,
you didn't accept me.
I gave you a ring,
you wouldn't accept it.
Afterwards I gave you nothing more,
I knew you wouldn't accept me.
Up the ladder:
song of the birds
Down the ladder:
Little Miss Muff
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Posted: November 14, 2002 11:16 AM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2002 11:16 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.462117 Overall Rank: 12878 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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15-Nov-02/1:36 AM
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Such a horible experience needs more beautiful words, baptize yourself in your emotion more, liked it enough - 6
a witches wart shant ne'er thwart..n
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