Free verse № 19987

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Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Oct 2002 · Edited 13 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

I hear my spirit calling Is she longing for me? A day closer to fate I will soon be gone Mistakes I have made in this life I can't say why or when I will never look back again No matter how strong I will still tumble down And soon I will return to the ground

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[6] Caducus 14-Nov-02/7:59 AM Reply

Not bad my philosophical stain

[n/a] purplestain › Caducus 20-Nov-02/9:35 PM Reply

i have certainly come a long way before i could come up with something as read-able as this