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untitled (Free verse) by purplestain

I hear my spirit calling Is she longing for me? A day closer to fate I will soon be gone Mistakes I have made in this life I can't say why or when I will never look back again No matter how strong I will still tumble down And soon I will return to the ground

purplestain 20-Nov-02/9:35 PM
i have certainly come a long way before i could come up with something as read-able as this




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