on epicentre by richa
13 Nov 2002, 5:39 AM
love the opening 4 stanzas best, your work is nice to read and i will look out for more of your work. I have noticed by reading poems on this site that theirs a lot of zerohappy raters on some pretty good stuff, if you get anything below 5 their talking shit, give this a 9, nice one richa, good luck
on My Friend? by Blade
13 Nov 2002, 4:51 AM
lose the last line, it dont deserve to be voted this shite by others i give 5 coz i reckon you were possessed by Ouzo
on There is no end by INTRANSIT
13 Nov 2002, 3:47 AM
That Hits !
on IF Now! by feathers68
12 Nov 2002, 9:33 AM
this sounds like a scene from a film called the prophecy, its a nice poem, too prayerlike for me, it wouldnt be out of place in a salacious mood. I have a theory of Angels.....the sound of your heartbeat is really the flapping of angels wings and that your heart is broken it carries your soul unto heaven so you are reincarnated into a new host so you have another chance of finding truelove, they are our guardian angels, bastards of a God who condemned them for challenging fate, so when you see a feather fall, it is an angel falling from grace, and they rain their love down on you, you cant fell it soak you but it does, What do i know man i'm fucked up
on A Green Moons Haze by pink_punk_kisses87
12 Nov 2002, 2:35 AM
Cool Ode
I too am numb
I too am numb
on Feelings Inside by confuzdlilgirl
11 Nov 2002, 9:27 AM
your verbal acoustic is well tuned, i give 7/10 because it flows with lament thicker than plasma, check mine out i'm a virgin writer on this site