Re: epicentre by richa	13-Nov-02/5:39 AM
love the opening 4 stanzas best, your work is nice to read and i will look out for more of your work. I have noticed by reading poems on this site that theirs a lot of zerohappy raters on some pretty good stuff, if you get anything below 5 their talking shit, give this a 9, nice one richa, good luck
Re: My Friend? by Blade	13-Nov-02/4:51 AM
lose the last line, it dont deserve to be voted this shite by others i give 5 coz i reckon you were possessed by Ouzo
Re: Returning by INTRANSIT	13-Nov-02/3:53 AM
Felt I was at on the starboard with him, a polished ode, but help me out on the last line, why the torturer?
Re: There is no end by INTRANSIT	13-Nov-02/3:47 AM
That Hits !
Re: IF Now! by feathers68	12-Nov-02/9:33 AM
this sounds like a scene from a film called the prophecy, its a nice poem, too prayerlike for me, it wouldnt be out of place in a salacious mood. I have a theory of Angels.....the sound of your heartbeat is really the flapping of angels wings and that your heart is broken it carries your soul unto heaven so you are reincarnated into a new host so you have another chance of finding truelove, they are our guardian angels, bastards of a God who condemned them for challenging fate, so when you see a feather fall, it is an angel falling from grace, and they rain their love down on you, you cant fell it soak you but it does, What do i know man i'm fucked up
Re: A Green Moons Haze by pink_punk_kisses87	12-Nov-02/2:35 AM
Cool Ode I too am numb
Re: Feelings Inside by confuzdlilgirl	11-Nov-02/9:27 AM
your verbal acoustic is well tuned, i give 7/10 because it flows with lament thicker than plasma, check mine out i'm a virgin writer on this site
Re: At A Loss by NewbieMe	11-Nov-02/9:03 AM
Could be improved, okay as it is obviously from the heart