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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya dream a dream
think a thought
feel what eye feel
cause me you are not
you are you
that's all you'll be
n' that's all you need
to fullfill your destiny
so be who you are
don't seek to be me
feel your soul n' touch
your reality
be not nobody
be not me
cause YOU are ME
when about yourself you speak
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Posted: November 13, 2002 6:54 PM PST; Last modified: November 13, 2002 6:54 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.231596 Overall Rank: 13197 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.164
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13-Nov-02/10:27 PM
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I (in the most non possessive sense) can dig it, but the ...s are killing me. Can't you number these things or something? Do you have something against that? I need clarity.
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logun2002ya @ 152.163.188.7
> poetandknowit
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14-Nov-02/7:46 PM
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poetry is one colective though...at least that's how eye see it...the poems are written in my book of poetry and they are all together...just spaced out...so the dot dot dot...just implies continuation of thought...and so eye go...dot dot dot...
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.... .... .... A true mindfucker of a poem, i want to read it again after reflection and maybe re-vote, watch this space i may have questions. wheres the paracetomol
I'm doing my best not to be you. God spare me from that fate.
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