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by logun2002ya

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

dream a dream think a thought feel what eye feel cause me you are not you are you that's all you'll be n' that's all you need to fullfill your destiny so be who you are don't seek to be me feel your soul n' touch your reality be not nobody be not me cause YOU are ME when about yourself you speak

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[5] poetandknowit 13-Nov-02/10:27 PM Reply

I (in the most non possessive sense) can dig it, but the ...s are killing me. Can't you number these things or something? Do you have something against that? I need clarity.

[n/a] logun2002ya › poetandknowit 14-Nov-02/7:46 PM Reply

poetry is one colective though...at least that's how eye see it...the poems are written in my book of poetry and they are all together...just spaced out...so the dot dot dot...just implies continuation of thought...and so eye go...dot dot dot...

[6] Caducus 14-Nov-02/8:03 AM Reply

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A true mindfucker of a poem, i want to read it again after reflection and maybe re-vote, watch this space i may have questions.

wheres the paracetomol

[0] Tintagiles 14-Nov-02/11:46 AM Reply

I'm doing my best not to be you. God spare me from that fate.